Neobot Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Need some quick criticism on anatomy, lighting, perspective, balance, mood or anything else? Just pop your picture in here for a quick constructive criticism to help push you in the right way. This will help all the artists out there to give their lot on something and get some good things back they may have overlooked. So if you got something you are proud to display yet think there's something a little bit off you just can't place your finger on, then post it here! Anyone can post, anyone can criticize! Remember to say absolutely anything that you think may be wrong, be nice, and not flame, just give helpful comments :D When posting just givea brief description of what you think may be wrong (if anything) and what the situation of the picture is (if its a scene) Also, no ripping please, this is sincere. Here's one to start off, It's a girl with Bunnies trying to dislodge her dragon WC axe Just need a check on anatomy especially her torso and right light also, if someone could draw the position of the facial features in, that would be great, I'm not too good as this is my first time drawing at this angle, and also drawing a girl, so I need a lot of crit of drawing 'the anatomy' at that perspective >_<. 01 vet :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 I love your drawing style. The anatomy looks fine to me, What's going on with the feet? My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neobot Posted January 31, 2007 Author Share Posted January 31, 2007 I love your drawing style. The anatomy looks fine to me, What's going on with the feet? Its just a sketch :P From the anatomy it looks off I think, I know her legs are a bit too muscular in relation to the rest of her body (although runescape does make the character walk around quite a lot of the time and you hardly have to do any heavy lifting :)). I'm just not too good with drawing girls and want to make sure its perfect before I develop it and colour it in (8 01 vet :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 drag WC ave? more like daroks, really very big imo, as with the feet, sketch, whatever, its discraceful! lol, i cant do it as well as you )= see i mimicked your backwards smiley thing, heh, aint i smart... :anxious: what i said is still true tho, the axe and feet are massive. aslo it seams you tried foreshortening the torso, but maybe to much... the top could do with more sigh it is a top, such as lose parts and flowing edges it seams like theres no base, just disapears under the chest and the arms just disapear as well, on closer inspection it ends at the wrists but still, define that better =) in fact its not just the feet, from the knees downwards its weird, i guess that'll be better defined in colouring, but yeah... still an issue. personaly id have more controled hair, but thats a preferance thing =) PJB21 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neobot Posted January 31, 2007 Author Share Posted January 31, 2007 She looks like a hairy Scotsman hips down XD Here's a quick fix. 01 vet :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharcoth Posted January 31, 2007 Share Posted January 31, 2007 Her chin should be more pointed. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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