February 2, 200719 yr The shutters. They smash down. The vibrations. Exploded. Through out my heart. The soft squish. Of empathy. Destroyed. In a second. A lance of dispair. Stalking. My soul. Cut down. A moment. It passed. A new wrench. The Bulwarks. Shuddering. My confidence ripped. Tore though. A once mighty wall. Rampaged, ransaked. Ruin. A million shards of glass, wrapped. In ambition. I tear free. Free to dance. In rage, hope, and glory. In love... ____ I stare across. This room. The bodies move. Some long dance. You stand out. Flame. In the wind. Draw me too you. Snake to water. Our eyes meet. A stolen glance. I turn away. You stare on. Turn back. Hypnotic. In a way. Entwine out gaze. Mental embrace. From dream. To life. My heart lingers. You think it over. Hand raised. Shaking. A little. Clasp together. I feel your breath. Quicken. We continue. Passion erupts. Our lips lock. But. The image fades. Dream away. You look away. I stare on... ____ Well basically these are just two poems that I got off the top of my head. The first from thinking about how I cage away my emotions, hide my fun side. The second was just staring across a room at someone, thinking I wish they would look up. Named the 30th of Febuary because they are passing fancy. The first I cage again, the second won't happen...well yet at least. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
February 2, 200719 yr *cries* I thought the second one was beautiful, it felt very emotional and deep. Some of the vocobularly is really nice too, 'Flame in the wind' The rhythm seemed a bit weird but I loved it. And I don't like the first one, dunno why.
February 2, 200719 yr Author Yes the rhythm....I planned that...obvouisly... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
February 3, 200719 yr I nteresting, though not one of my favs, nice work on it though I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.
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