warri0r45 Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 Cold Silence. Please, leave me alone, I hate the noise I hear. Ringing telephones, a cancer in my ear. Please, leave me be, make no violent noises. I want to sail the seas, Free to make no choices. Please, leave me rot, leave me rot beneath my skin. Your everything I'm not, my soul's worn too thin. Please, leave me die, leave me in this cadence. Please, leave my cry, crying in cold silence. I just made this up. :ohnoes: Comments are welcome. :ohnoes: :ohnoes: ... best read cold with a depressing music accompanyment. :ohnoes: :ohnoes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 It was...ok not really great and I was listening to depressing music. Well done though worth the read. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 I really liked it!!! \ (Maybe that smiley's not very appropriate...) :D The language was pretty good and the structure worked well, nice poem, definitely worth reading:D LeeLee (who is here now) says... I think you really leashed onto a certain mood, well done.................one more thing to say.......................................................this isn't based on a real experience i hope?????????????????????????????????????????????? loved it :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warri0r45 Posted February 4, 2007 Author Share Posted February 4, 2007 I really liked it!!! \ (Maybe that smiley's not very appropriate...) :D The language was pretty good and the structure worked well, nice poem, definitely worth reading:D LeeLee (who is here now) says... I think you really leashed onto a certain mood, well done.................one more thing to say.......................................................this isn't based on a real experience i hope?????????????????????????????????????????????? loved it :mrgreen: Haha, not based on a real experience. Thanks for the feedback. : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 meh, not bad, but not a fav, I dont really care for it, or its style, still maybe effort counts I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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