February 11, 200719 yr I posted this on another forum a while ago, just wanted to put it here. It's sort of a ... random poem, made from flashes of inspiration banded together into a poem. Hope you like it. Song of the Prophet The darkness is total but there's a light, where there once was peace now We must fight, the weapons are ready, the foe's in sight, as night kills the sun so day slays night! The new world is born as the old world dies, the new god draws strength from the old god's cries, at the stub of the shadows when the old year dies, the new year is born from an infant's cries - I am the man of the moon and stars, the armies of God upon the march, i am an infant, who but i peeps from the unknown dolmen arch? Invoke the stars and invoke the trees, invoke the lands and invoke the seas, invoke the hills and invoke the streams, invoke this world and Invoke our dreams! The moon and stars lie in balance, The sky rests on the Earth's pillars, While the world lives on rotating on, a place of life and a place of killers! I am the god of the earth and sky, the armies of man upon the march! I am an ancient, who but I enters the unknown dolmen arch? I am the prophet of gods and men, i am the sun of the Earth and Sky! i come to the world again and again, I never was born, and I Never Shall Die! Note: Any mis-capitalizations are intentional. If you don't like them, sorry, I did it for emphasis. P.S. don't flame about the subject matter. I don't condone, favor, or endorse a specific set of religious views.
February 11, 200719 yr Very good. This is a poem that should really have short sentances like one of mine. You already have done half of it by capitalising some of the words. Anyway its a good poem and I enjoyed it, though the rhythem was a bit rocky at times. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
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