It's quite good for a first, actually it is great for a first, but here's some CC:
Firstly, even though the movement of the female is great her figure is a bit off, her thighs are too big for her body and her legs are entirely off.
Add more definiton on her left leg by working on the kneecap and below and make the right leg a bit farther away from her [wagon] so you can see it better.
You will need to practice making her boots several times I imagine.
For the monster, to make him seem muscular in a 'rocky-way' you need to roughen your shading around his muscles, and make the creases seem much deeper(shade darker&bigger). Also work on his chest as right now it looks like saggy man boobs and I doubt that's what you're attempting.
For him to be "hunched over" you need to dark the area around his mid-upper neck much more, and make the shading large too, raise his head a touch, and perhaps make his shoulders a touch lighter or darker depending on where the your lighting.
Overall your shading on the big guy is fantastic, your structural drawing is quite good, and the general result is looking to be promising.
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It's quite good for a first, actually it is great for a first, but here's some CC:
Firstly, even though the movement of the female is great her figure is a bit off, her thighs are too big for her body and her legs are entirely off.
Add more definiton on her left leg by working on the kneecap and below and make the right leg a bit farther away from her [wagon] so you can see it better.
You will need to practice making her boots several times I imagine.
For the monster, to make him seem muscular in a 'rocky-way' you need to roughen your shading around his muscles, and make the creases seem much deeper(shade darker&bigger). Also work on his chest as right now it looks like saggy man boobs and I doubt that's what you're attempting.
For him to be "hunched over" you need to dark the area around his mid-upper neck much more, and make the shading large too, raise his head a touch, and perhaps make his shoulders a touch lighter or darker depending on where the your lighting.
Overall your shading on the big guy is fantastic, your structural drawing is quite good, and the general result is looking to be promising.