I'm sorry to see this story die off. It is simply AMAZING. I am posting this both because I want to keep this story alive and to encourage the writer to continue with this story if he (or she) returns to this forum any time soon. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort to write this much to entertain others, and I hope very much that you write more. I give this story a 9.5/10. I would have given it a ten except for the fact that u left it incomplete :( .