Boooo such a rip off of death note at the end... Cmon man.... L, Ren, and the note that deletes websites. It was interesting until I reached that part.
Aww cmon when i finaly remember tip it i come to a story that seems to be left behind.... don't kill this one like you did that other one. What was it again erm. Meh w/e just write more chapters! :evil: :evil:
Aww I was hoping for it to end with a bang. Like for once the wilderness army wins at the end and the Amethyst Rangers are forced to scatter all over runescape. Then he would have the job of reuniting the Amythyst Rangers and also avenging his mom.
Great story (kinda short but still great.) Also forgot to mention the KBD not only breathes fire but breathes poisen and ice. One type from each of his heads.
Dude your post has at least 3 spelling mistakes I noticed in it... So really if your telling him to look back through his maybe you should look back through yours.