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Only a few grammatical errors, and what you spelled "prolouge" is spelled "prologue." Other than that, it was very interesting and drew me in. The detail is very good. These are on par with the skill of your poetry. As usual, keep writing!

They're quite good. You should keep writing poetry like this, especially haikus. There are also the response poems (forgot the names!) that are two lines long. These were mostly used by lovers in Japan to decide whether they should marry (or so I believe, I may be wrong).

Very good story. Is "kamerad" supposed to be "comrade," or is that just how the guy says it? It is underlined by red by my spellcheck, weird, but the spellcheck is also underlined in red. Either way, it still is amazing. Keep writing, though I doubt you need to hear that message anyway.

Just to let you know, God is in the Outside (or so I believe). Read Xenocide by Orson Scott Card to get what I mean. There is no space or time or where in the Outside universe; it is like a sphere that is infinitely moving outward, so you are never going to reach the center. Just my views on God (if there is any) and how he could so easily create things, like Jane is able to do. Read the book to find out more (I'm not advertising!).

Absolutely amazing. I'm 12, but I have tried to avoid the RSOF. I'm almost 13, finally! I'm smarter than average, I think...It's still an incredible story. It is at least 6.5 felguards, which are 1 felhunter=2 souls (soul-shards, if you are a player or fan of World of Warcraft). In other words, 16/10 or 6.5/5. Whichever one suits you more. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!! Heh...heh....haha...

Amazing work. You are one of the best authors in this library. It's an incredible story with a creepy plot and it leaves me wondering about the man. I have decided to use a form of counting as well: souls. It has to be at least 11 souls out of the usual 10. You're great.

Quite good, though if you show a bit more of the senses besides sight (hearing, smell, taste, and touch). Maybe a bit more detail, though it's great as it is on that subject. Give a bit more on the descriptions of characters, though. It's great so far. As you said you would, keep writing.

I always grade things in kittens. I used to think, whenever anyone said "7/10", "What does that mean? Seven out of ten what?". Thus, to avoid any confusion, I grade things in kittens. Besides, who doesn't want kittens? They're so fluffy and cute I LOVE KITTENS! By the way, good poem. I wonder why Archimage hasn't posted much recently...

Remember. PC is for level 40 and up only, he's at closer to half of that requirement.

Eventhoughthesoundofitisreallyquiteatrocious. BOOMBOOM! :-w

Drunk.

As will I, may you rest in peace dear thread. We will uncover you in many years from now when the library will be brought back from the dead....but I still didn't get the chance to truly star in it. I shall miss you Snake and Noob!

Pretty funny, especially the stuff in parentheses below "The Blue Jay Files." (This is not a byproduct of Russia) Keep up the funniness (wow, the spellcheck didn't hate the word....it's a word :shock: :shock: :shock: ).

Which one, they're going by quite fast right now.

The excessive shortness was due to the fact that I had to get off of the computer, and when I have more time, I will write the next and better chapter. Now I see why people only have small areas written down, so that they can give detail to that small area and not a crappier massive expanse...