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Only a few grammatical errors, and what you spelled "prolouge" is spelled "prologue." Other than that, it was very interesting and drew me in. The detail is very good. These are on par with the skill of your poetry. As usual, keep writing!

They're quite good. You should keep writing poetry like this, especially haikus. There are also the response poems (forgot the names!) that are two lines long. These were mostly used by lovers in Japan to decide whether they should marry (or so I believe, I may be wrong).

Very good story. Is "kamerad" supposed to be "comrade," or is that just how the guy says it? It is underlined by red by my spellcheck, weird, but the spellcheck is also underlined in red. Either way, it still is amazing. Keep writing, though I doubt you need to hear that message anyway.

Just to let you know, God is in the Outside (or so I believe). Read Xenocide by Orson Scott Card to get what I mean. There is no space or time or where in the Outside universe; it is like a sphere that is infinitely moving outward, so you are never going to reach the center. Just my views on God (if there is any) and how he could so easily create things, like Jane is able to do. Read the book to find out more (I'm not advertising!).

Absolutely amazing. I'm 12, but I have tried to avoid the RSOF. I'm almost 13, finally! I'm smarter than average, I think...It's still an incredible story. It is at least 6.5 felguards, which are 1 felhunter=2 souls (soul-shards, if you are a player or fan of World of Warcraft). In other words, 16/10 or 6.5/5. Whichever one suits you more. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!! Heh...heh....haha...

Amazing work. You are one of the best authors in this library. It's an incredible story with a creepy plot and it leaves me wondering about the man. I have decided to use a form of counting as well: souls. It has to be at least 11 souls out of the usual 10. You're great.

Quite good, though if you show a bit more of the senses besides sight (hearing, smell, taste, and touch). Maybe a bit more detail, though it's great as it is on that subject. Give a bit more on the descriptions of characters, though. It's great so far. As you said you would, keep writing.

I always grade things in kittens. I used to think, whenever anyone said "7/10", "What does that mean? Seven out of ten what?". Thus, to avoid any confusion, I grade things in kittens. Besides, who doesn't want kittens? They're so fluffy and cute I LOVE KITTENS! By the way, good poem. I wonder why Archimage hasn't posted much recently...

Remember. PC is for level 40 and up only, he's at closer to half of that requirement.

Eventhoughthesoundofitisreallyquiteatrocious. BOOMBOOM! :-w

Drunk.

As will I, may you rest in peace dear thread. We will uncover you in many years from now when the library will be brought back from the dead....but I still didn't get the chance to truly star in it. I shall miss you Snake and Noob!

Pretty funny, especially the stuff in parentheses below "The Blue Jay Files." (This is not a byproduct of Russia) Keep up the funniness (wow, the spellcheck didn't hate the word....it's a word :shock: :shock: :shock: ).

Which one, they're going by quite fast right now.

The excessive shortness was due to the fact that I had to get off of the computer, and when I have more time, I will write the next and better chapter. Now I see why people only have small areas written down, so that they can give detail to that small area and not a crappier massive expanse...

LOL. But if you make a few bad plays, you might get demoted or even fired, ooooh. :shock: Tell me tomorrow which team won. And Blue Jay, blame Archimage for being so evil. It could be Archimage itself, though...

OK, since I haven't been working on this for a bit I am going to put out a few segments and I'm going to hope somebody new decides to comment on it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Strike me once and you will see the truth. Strike me twice and you shall see all wisdom poured out for you. But strike me three times and pain will be your last feeling. Chapter Five: Taming "Hello, child. Wake up now, we have a busy day today," Archimage told me as she woke me up. Groggy, I replied, "And what do I do today?" "Get out of bed and you will see." "Why do you always do that?" I asked, and she knew it was rhetorical as I got out of the small bed. She left a few seconds later, and it was then that I proceeded to get on my clothes. It was the usual today: black skin-tight shirt, weird exercising pants with the same texture as the shirt, and a dagger with a glowing black edge. I knew to go to the breakfast hall, which meant a short walk in the pleasant weather. The leaves were blowing gently with the wind. The air seemed perfect, and I wasn't the only one; other people were taking walks in the fresh morning air. I felt like I could breathe, which was what I liked most about the Library in particular, besides the rows of books. The breakfast hall was crowded when I went in, as usual. I found Archimage at a table on the far side of the room, where she was eating an orange and had a plate with some fruit on it. I said hello and went over to the buffet and took some bacon, a pancake, a waffle, and a banana. I then went over to my seat and began to eat. As usual, both Archimage and I finished at the same time. We went to a wing in the Library known as the Chamber of Training. "Now I will tell you what the plans are." "Finally," I replied, letting out a massive fake sigh. "I will, at last, teach you something. This lesson will take many hours of practice and training to complete, and only then can we do what is required to win this war. You will learn to store energy, rather than releasing it the moment you get it. Watch me." I saw her arm begin to glow a raw red for a few seconds, before it got even stronger. I watched in awe for a few minutes, before she let the stored fire go. Her arm spun around at an unprecedented speed, a strong glow bursting from her arm. I just stared as she held a dagger and as the glow moved into it. So that was how the weapons got the odd outline. There was more to learn. And there was not much time.

OHMYGOSH! It was Blue Jay! Ain't it obvious?

I can't see the pictures! A fight and a half with "Image not found", oh my Lord please save me! *BAMBAMBAM* Bypassing weirdos: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

YOU SOUND LIKE MY MOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry, BlueJay. I'm not saying I'm wrong, I'm just sorry. And now I need something to eat as a replacement for Archimage. Anybody want to be eaten? Anybody at all? Ok, I have a volunteer. Say hi, mister! :D Ok, how are you feeling today? A bit musical? :boohoo: Look at what I will do to him! While I :-# to you, I'll turn off the soon-to-be violent and graphic images and let you hear plain old audio. *Crunching noises and a scream* Mister: :shock: Me: :-w I did nothing at all! Now, mister what happened? "Nothing." :^o Oh god! He lies! Kill him too! Kill every person! Now that the worst of the images are about to come, we have decided to give some video coverage. :twisted: :twisted: The fool of a cameraman thought he would do something smart! I'm going to eat him! :thumbsup: So, I think that will be the weird guy news, unofficial and illegal, broadcasting over Oakimage O's slightly messed up newscasts. That's all for now, and goodbye!

As you wish, BlueJay. You're not gay. You're bisexual. Sorry, it just fits your criteria.

Or, using Kam's ideas, you could make a story about Karamja or the other various islands out in the sea.

I based it on nobody in particular, and I really don't know. Truth is, I could be writing more of ShadowBlood then I really am, as I WOULD like some other responses by Archimage who is...*sniff*...so kind as to give helpful advice and saying that at least SOMEONE likes the story!

You're back! Welcome back and people, stop hyperventilating and say hi to him and, as my minions, beg for more Snake and Noob!

Um man, I hate to break it to you, but Archimage is a she...She hides it by using the name Archimage in a male character. From what I learned, she's either from Britain or has very direct ties to there. Or maybe that's all lies....You never know, with someone like her.