powerent

Not me, I only like to juice cats (I'm a Melmacian, cats are a delicacy). Who tried to take my lunch money, before I killed them and left them in a dumpster in an alley?

Granted, but you get caught again. (sorry I didn't wish last time, I was just thinking about corruption) I wish I could have total control over ice, as in making weapons, armor, tools, etc., but WITHOUT being able to strain myself too far, dying of fatigue from producing it, and/or being hated or coveted for being able to make it. Corrupt that!

Your rear end

9.9/10, HELP!!! Heh, heh... :twisted:

False, I like wet water. TPUM has forgotten to take their medicine today.

Powerent- December 16th

Mister Gaymer. (sorry if that offends you, it's just funny.)

Granted, but then he adds, "N00b!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!" and you have to move away.

And bled profusely...

Banned for staring at people's signatures.

...Incredible. Powerful, detailed, dark, ultimate, and any adjective or synonym that relates to those. That is most likely the best story I've come across in the entire library. Your English is some of the best I've seen on the entire forum, even better than most English-as-a-first-language people here! There is a tiny amount of repetition in a few words, but that is because English has a massive range of words that describe another word; very confusing. I have to say, Congratulations! You have made, by far, the best story I've read at tip.it.

Odd.... :lol:

7/10, weird pic. 8-)

You're doing it right now! Capitalization of "I", punctuation, remembering to put apostrophes, these guys ' ' '. In other words, check grammar and punctuation carefully, cause I'm not going to be a human spell-check.

Do I have to make my own story for my character, or what? Give me a chapter, and I have a good idea for my next part. In this realm where I am in, there IS blood and gore, it's just that anybody who sees violence gets their souls sucked out through their eyes. And when their soul is taken out in that realm, it is the equivalent of death. P.S. I like to throw spades as my weapon of choice in those lands, before looking away so that I may see no violence.

Good so far, and I noticed a few mistakes, but not many. In the first paragraph, you spelled Varrock "Varrok." You also said "too" instead of "to" when he came to an inn. Also, the "poot" monk, I think you meant to say "poor." Besides that, it was great. Keep writing.

banned for encouraging others to click advertisements and pose a threat of being keylogged (that's mainly on other games, other forums).

Covered in dung...

Granted, but he happens to lure you into the wildy while holding a few million, some phats, 30 whips, and a machine gun. He then gets about 10 people with ice barrage to murder you with them. I wish BlazikenMaster would stop making lame wishes.

Just put that I drain their souls out through their eyes, and they don't die, they just cease to exist. There is a difference in this context.

I found a hilarious mistake, you said their eyes pooped, not their eyes popped. Also, I need to cause some pain at least, as long as there's not too much blood and/or gore. Otherwise, I be fine.

Don't think I've read The Adventures of Jack, I'll look for it. Edit: I have, in fact, read it. Nice story.

You can lose the pounds, sure, but based on genetics and a smaller variant that you can control, it can change how easy it is to keep it off. Nothing I can say to help besides good luck! :D On a side note: I'm skinny, but I was one of the few people who passed a pull-ups physical test in Gym class. I amazed my self when that happened.

And so, Ralph and Chuck, doing the only possible thing, begin to Ralph and Chuck.

7/10, looks like an owl with the filled mouth capacity of a fat squirrel.