Bonethor

- no name made up yet, suggestions? - Why are we here? To breed and sleep - that's a damn lie, just shut up and die New dawn, new night, I've never seen moon this bright Together we could go through this ride, when will I find you from my side? Burden on my shoulders growing heavier day by day, why do I have to stay? They say throwing life away is not a solution, it'll only bring up another option Give me months, give me years, I'll bring back your fears Tomorrow those eyes will be bleeding eternal tears I was wondering about all kinds of things, got a bit frustrated, opened notepad and started writing, this was there after two minutes, scary. Well people, what do you think of it? :)

I'm releasing you from your pain. Yeah nice story, quite clichy text but hey that's what you're supposed to write :) found couple of annoying typos there though. It's ok 7.5/10 Telling so much about the guy would better fit for a longer story (even a book).