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Shush.. I dont feel so great right now tbh. I think it might be the weathers :P We are getting hit with a nasty storm right now :P Anywho be happy bluejay :P I could have not posted at all :o But I wouldnt do that! I like writing the story as much as you like reading it! ~ Lady Cheyenne

TOLD YOU! Chapter 2.2 I feel slightly confident as I walk behind this stranger to my surprise. I have just placed trust in this young man that would take years for others to gain. I wonder to myself why I chose to believe him. Could it be his personality, which makes you want to tell him all of your secrets right after meeting him? Was it the sparkling adventurous look in his eyes when he saw the sword pointed towards him? What I did not know at the time was how important this young one would be. We walk down many twisting corridors until we reach a very large chamber. This young stranger dismisses his guards and turns to me, Before you trust me, I want you to know who I am. I am Promicus son. I did a quick double take and quickly drew my sword and held it against his throat. The thought to kill him right then and there ran through my mind but I had to let him explain what was going on to me and killing him wouldnt bring justice. I slowly sheathed my sword as he took a breath and began to speak. ~ Lady Cheyenne

Week old popcorn?? eww! Thats just gross. Im about to go finish up this next chapter so just please make some new popcorn hun. ~ Lady Cheyenne

NOT LIE!! Lol I started writing it last night and I have a light workload today so the likelyhood that there will be more posted is pretty good. Anywho.. I promise to make this next chapter part longer too! I do seem to like leaving you guys hanging though :P That would be why they tend to be a little shorter! ~ Lady Cheyenne

Lol yerrr.. I know.. They arent due for a week or two but still. Teachers irritate me. Anyways... here is the long awaited chapter 2.1! Chapter 2.1 I lie back down and wait for the thundering footsteps to reach me. I know if I stand up they will be more likely to see the outline of the sword I have hidden under my clothing, either way they are likely to find it eventually, the question is, will they be able to take it. The footsteps continue to get closer and my heart flutters just a little bit. Millions of questions fly through my head. Are they coming down to kill me? What are they going to do? Am I going to live to see my father again? I have to push all of these thoughts out of my head and get into a calmer state of mind. I quickly stand up and draw my sword as the footsteps head towards my cell. I forget about trying to hide the fact that I have my sword back and prepare to fight my way out. As the cell door creaks open, I am surprised to see a young man accompanied by a few burly guards. He surprises me yet again by laughing at me posed with my sword few inches from his throat. He motions for me to follow him and laughs yet again when I refuse. Come with me Iliana. I promise you wont be harmed by me or my guards. He mumbled something other that I could not make out. I quietly sized this man up and decided to follow him. He seemed to have a certain dignity to him and I doubted that he would go back on his word. ~ Lady Cheyenne ( btw! More will be written tomorrow as far as I know )

Whoah Whoah Whoah.. For your guys information I am taking all advanced classes as well as advanced spanish so dont call middle school easy :P Anyways I slipped up :( I forgot to write.. I got slammed with 5 algebra assignments on my first day of school.. *goes to write* More by tomorrow!! PROMISE!! ~Chey

Psh I like school you nub!! I have more time during the week to write after school starts. Plus hun.. im still a middle schooler = less work! So haha :P I still luvz you tho! ~ Lady Chey

Ooi.. sorry I didnt post anymore.. I havent had much time to write.. my daddy has been visiting and he goes home tomorrow so I was spending lotsa times with him. Promise more this coming week. School be staaaarting. ~Lady Chey

Oooh you big highschooler you! I dont go to high school till next year sadly :o I should have some more posted by tomorrow <3 so its not that long of a wait. *sighs and brings up Microsoft Word* My story awaits me! ~ Lady Chey

Oh shush :P Im brainstorming atm :P Planning on writing later on tonight. ~ Lady Chey

Normally I do not get involved in debates because they can be a tad annoying at times, but this one seems like a good one! Personally I would never ever buy a party hat. The rarity of items is not what makes me want them or not want them. Its personally how much use I will get out of them and the price being a factor of course. The only major purchases I have made are barrows armour, a whip, and a dragon axe and I really dont plan on buying much of anything else at the time. Personally I think Party hats and such are burdens. Do you really get any respect out of it? From what I have heard you mostly get lower level players asking to borrow it, or high level players asking if they can buy it. Where is the respect in that? It sounds like it is mostly jealousy and wanting to have it. Does it make player look up to you when you wear it? Does it make them think "oh that noob he is showing off his party hat... thats so lame"? I guess deciding whether its a respect or burden would be in the eye of the beholder.. seeing as there is so much to consider. ~ Lady Chey

Lol same for me :P I prefer writing and reading whereas role-playing really doesn't spark my attention. Nice writing Xewleer :P I misses you!! Lol anyyyyywwaaayys I really should get back to my own writing :) ~ Lady Chey

Nah uh Nah uh Nah uhhhh.. Not thhhhaaaat many smilies and im not all that hyper im just wide awake from some odd reason! and considering its closing in on midnight thats really not normal for me :P anywho.. my dad is watching star wars atm ( yuck ) and im more into fantasy than sci fi so imma stay on for a bit.. I love contradicting myself lol :P and Bluejay <3 my world is quite twisted! Wait till you see what I have in store for chapter two :P Its gonna a-blow your mind :) Gotta love me right?? ~ Lady Chey

Are you calling my story world twisted??? and thanks for the comments guys.. If all goes as planned I will write some more around 1ish in the morning ( an hour and a half from now ) and write for maybe a half hour or so... possibly longer! and aquariusman the whole hyper-active talk in between chapter parts is like.. me being normal!! I am just verry verry verry silly :P I love it too!! and yerr.. my character is a girl as am I! and Dutch thanks for the comment :P I appreeeecciiiaaate it :) and of course Bluejay :D You have been loyally commenting since I have been writing this story and I reaaaaaalllllyyy appreciate it. If you havent guessed by now, I cant sleep. A whole bag and a half of twizzlers a handful of oreos and some other snackys will do that to you! Anywho.. I will deffinitely hopefully write some more later on... btw.. When I spell words kind of funny its usually on purpose.. I love using double letters when they arent supposed to be there or adding a "ys" to some words :P It comes with the personalityy :) Though seriously... imma go watch a movie with my daddy! More Later! ~ Lady Chey

Im sorry :oops: It has been a bit hectic seeing as school starts soon and my dad is visiting. I havent really had a chance to sit down and write at all... I promise to keep working on it and post AS SOON as I finish part 2.1 lol... I have gone almost weeks lately with NO computer :cry: And I havent played runescape in around 3-4 weeks :shock: Imma go log on now tho hehe.. I promise to write more latttteeeeeerrrrrrr... ~ Lady Chey

No worries! I should have a bit written by then, I started it this morning and I hope to possibly either write longer chapter parts or just post the whole chapter at once. I am not quite sure how it will work yet, but it should be done soon. ~ Chey

I haven't forgotten about you guys! I am quite sorry that nothing has been posted for such a long amount of time. I have been a bit ill lately :P But I am well again now, and without any further ado, here is the last chapter part of chapter 1! Chapter 1.5 I slowly sit up and wince at the dull throbbing in my head. It seems that most of the pain has resided seeing as I am able to move without feeling I might pass out. I stand up too fast and a sudden spell of dizziness almost knocks me off my feet. I lie back down and slowly slip into the comforting darkness of sleep. I dream of a time where my father would hug and kiss me goodnight, to a time when I would sit on his knee and beg for one last story. I can still see his face clearly; even so, the image fades a little more every day. I dream back to a time when I would run around in the courtyard with the sun shining on my face, oh how I miss the sun, the warmth and comfort that I can only long for now. I try to remember a time when my mother would play with my father and myself, yet I cannot find one. My mother was a bit air headed to say the least. She liked to sit up in her tower, and be waited on hand and foot. She was a very beautiful woman just not very bright. How else could you explain how she was able to flee while leaving her only child behind? I wake up suddenly and hear guards thumping down the hall. Perhaps I am about to get out of this accursed dungeon. End Of Chapter 1 Yes, I know it is a bit short, but I plan on writing up the beginning of chapter two quite quickly! ~ Chey

Ohmygawd.. its pronounced Shy btw :P I am so so sorry! My littlest sister who is 6 has had some medical issues lately so I have been very busy helping babysit my other siblings while my mom runs her back and forth from doctors visits, and getting up in the middle of the night to calm her down when she cries. I am writing RIGHT NOW so it shall be posted soon. Again I am very very sorry! ~ Lady Chey

Gimme some! NO NO NO NO NO! Mines! hehe.. today isnt a better day to write.. I cant concentrate.. root beer and chocolate and and cookies will do that too ya! I should get some written tomorrow depending on what time I go swimming! ~ Chey

lol NO WAI!!!! I hate cleaning tbh. Im very hyper, Chocolate Fudge Poptarts and TWIZZLERS will do that too you! hehe hehe.. LOL anyways.. I had better go do something to make me less hyper .. Idk what yet! Lol anyways! More writing later! ~ Chey

Lol I got my room semi clean :thumbsup: Yay, I am all dried off now!!! I got stuck in a sudden rain storm with my friends Celina and Amanda, and we got drenched! It was so much fun! Off to go get 69 def if possible. I will probably write tomorrow! Plus, I like my hair long, I hate it short. ~ Chey

Oi, welcome to my thread llamster! I will work on longer chapter parts, do remember, that they arent actual chapters, just the parts, I figure once i finish a chapter i will c&p everything into a hide tab in the first post to make it more accessible. I had to get a haircut today ( yuck! ) so I didnt have a chance to write yet, Who knows whether I will have time later today or not. Anyways! Off to go clean my room ( again ). ~Chey

haha, Longer chapters, I could do that I suppose. Tsk tsk blue jay, Eww, It looks a tad rainy out, yall might be in luck, there just might be another chapter on its way!! Thankies for the feedback btw. ~ Chey

They definitely sparked some interest in me :thumbsup: Anyways, I might be able to post more this week. By the way, Blue Jay, What did you think of my latest chapter parts? You never commented on them much so I am just a tad curious! ~ Chey

Oi! I got baptized at age ...7 I think so that was.... 6 years ago?? I suppose thats right. Sorry I havent been able to post very much.. Summer is always a busy time for me. Xewleer, Its nice to see your bright and shining face on this thread again! I missed all of your... constructive criticism... Maybe... Anywho, off to check out runescapes new graphics, considering I have been lazy and havent seen them yet : ~Chey