Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I guess I did miss many points, but I tried to make it in a rush (even though it took me like 5 hours, anyway xD) Since I use Sony Vegas Pro 10, I saved a .veg project file, so I might actually add some more parts to it. You're right about the clicking thing, too :) I personally just think the whole thing seems rushed and possibly even confusing, especially for a beginner (referring to the first couple of slides). I've discussed and researching using the ectofuntus and I've come to conclusion that it's a waste of time, lol. So I didn't really wanna add that in there. Even though it 'only' has 2 dislikes, I'm still really bothered as I actually put effort into this guide, especially the editing, since I have like 30 subs. Especially after finding out some guy disliked it and called it a "[cabbage] vid" whilst he has a freestyling video with 23 dislikes and 1 like. Oh well, haters gon' hate. To improve, how do you think I should start out the video? I think the emote and stuff in the beginning was good, but I meant after that. Sorry for the huge post xD Edit: also, don't you think there's a bit too much text?