umm whats wrong with my english you talking to me or someone else cause i proofread the whole passage before i posted dude :wink: Sorry if i sounded a bit rude just then, and that ill be sounding a little rude now. It's just your lack of paragraphs and punctuations, and your general "and then" style narrative. No personal offence 8) im not the smartest english student or anything and i like to type improper too but geez dont correct anyone if you cant do it yourself shouldnt ill be like I'll ? there is a subtle difference between TYPOS and BLATANT LACK OF ENGLISHNESSITY