mm, at face value id give it 8/10 but i dont understand the whole 'bury the future' and im not sure but isnt the font like a japanesse kinda thing, i dont see how that fits in with your backround, or otherway around. and also how the first 'the' is different from the second, looks unbalanced, i say make them all the same. id like to hear ur point on my critisism <- spelled wrong