YukkyDins

This was a very good story!! An extremely good one! They shouldn't have been too casual about the war coming though. Don't make Karsten perfect. It will ruin the whole story. And don't use Draynor or Barbarian Villlage either. Call them say "Draldon" and "The Black Forest". The word "old fart" doesn't fit in. You either make it a comedy or a scary end of the world kind. Don't mix them though. It was a very good idea though and a very good introduction. PLEASE CONTINUE!

It was a rather good attempt. Try not to use your friend's REAL Runescape names next time. It makes it sound a bit stupid. And how could you have written it if you were dead? Apart from those two points, it was a very good story!

Will the Runescape Mystery take the Varrok Library by storm or will it be a huge flop? I'd like to think it will be a success. The Runescape Mystery is about Zezima. He has a huge problem. His house is being robbed by an unknown thief! Agent Agubus is called into action to solve this mystery once and for all. But the thefts get worse. Will Agubus solve the crime in time before it gets extremely serious? Or will the thief keep on his evil deeds? This is Runescape Mystery!

It's not really fair, you know! You wrote it when Cursed You was only 2 levels clear of the lead. So, nope, it doesn't count!! TEEHEE LOL!

Once I would have placed my bets on Cyrano74 or Venom0619 but now I place them all on N0valyfe! Bfy52

Tigra00, the biggest RuneScape update is out, construction! It MIGHT make you want to continue playing, I mean you're so good, I checked your hiscores. See you Bfy52