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Ok my 1st true pixel


Pureleader18

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The linework on the left guy is nice.

 

 

 

The linework on the right guy is a bit disapointing in comparison to the left guy.

 

 

 

The left guy has nice body structure and realistic phsycial appearance, whereas the right guy looks to be a bit stubby (shorter than left guy, yet wider then left guy).

 

 

 

The shield on right guy is fairly good.

 

 

 

Nice scenery (Icy tone to the sig, with a night sky and nicely-drawn cabin).

 

 

 

ColourChoice could be improved and adjusted.

 

 

 

For example, I believe you were planning to achieve a cold night scene. Now, while you've got the cold tone going, it's quite difficult to believe that the scene is in the night, as the 'blue-green' colours you have used are too bright and contrasting with the sky. Keep in mind, moonlight is not 'that' light.

 

 

 

Shading could be improved.

 

 

 

What are the miscellaneous objects/shapes on the ground? The blue polygons...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There's some CC, thanks.

 

 

 

General Rating: 6/10

 

 

 

First Sig Bonus: +1.5

 

 

 

Final Rating: 7.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Y-M-M-S

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