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YES i know shading sucks, btw 100% MS paint.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw can someone resize it? its a bit too big

2/10... not very good at all

Wow I like keep up the good work.

2/10... not very good at all

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jeese, at least give him a suggestion, he tried... :wink:

Thanks :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

remember this is my first pixel sig. be easy...

2/10... not very good at all

 

 

 

its much better then the stick figure piece of crap you have as a sig... :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i like it gj :)

i know right... lol 8)

i like th eline work on the guy on the left he looks kool just need a lil color ajusting maybe?

thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

like wat color changes?

Really nice job, I like it, i'm currently working on my first pixel right now, nice job I love it but the arms are too bulky and you need to work on shading but for a first it's awesome, 8\10

The linework on the left guy is nice.

 

 

 

The linework on the right guy is a bit disapointing in comparison to the left guy.

 

 

 

The left guy has nice body structure and realistic phsycial appearance, whereas the right guy looks to be a bit stubby (shorter than left guy, yet wider then left guy).

 

 

 

The shield on right guy is fairly good.

 

 

 

Nice scenery (Icy tone to the sig, with a night sky and nicely-drawn cabin).

 

 

 

ColourChoice could be improved and adjusted.

 

 

 

For example, I believe you were planning to achieve a cold night scene. Now, while you've got the cold tone going, it's quite difficult to believe that the scene is in the night, as the 'blue-green' colours you have used are too bright and contrasting with the sky. Keep in mind, moonlight is not 'that' light.

 

 

 

Shading could be improved.

 

 

 

What are the miscellaneous objects/shapes on the ground? The blue polygons...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There's some CC, thanks.

 

 

 

General Rating: 6/10

 

 

 

First Sig Bonus: +1.5

 

 

 

Final Rating: 7.5/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Y-M-M-S

wow thanks, thanks for those tips. :o

All the same colour its not my taste, Nice tho

7/10 since its ur first one. I dont like how the 2nd character is fat, and perspectivie is kinda wrong. Its good start though