March 15, 200719 yr Here it is.. Please rate, or post some thoughts. How can i make it better? First: The edit, small spelling errors, made a bit more etc. : [Whip drops: 13]
March 15, 200719 yr Not bad, quite simple. Got a few spelling errors, such as 'wacth', 'jume' and 'stucked'. (Watch, Jump, Stuck.) 3rd person to reach 200M Fm Xp ~ Reached on 9th March 2008 Retired 4th August, 2008.
March 15, 200719 yr Author Thanks for the comments! My english aint the best, so thanks for the help! Edit: Should i make in the corner like; Jump into sandpit / 2 more options, thingy? [Whip drops: 13]
March 15, 200719 yr It's your drawing, entirely up to you =P 3rd person to reach 200M Fm Xp ~ Reached on 9th March 2008 Retired 4th August, 2008.
March 15, 200719 yr Author Then ill do it :D But i gotta go to school now.. Edit: Fixed a bit of mistakes, and made a little extra here and there. [Whip drops: 13]
March 18, 200719 yr the watch the golden coin thing is weird english change watch to see "you see a golden coin in the sand" Tip.it's official Ninja
March 18, 200719 yr That looks pretty good...ALot better then i could do anyways Doomy edit: I like sheep
March 18, 200719 yr Hahah, I loll'ed, thats a nice fake. Not hard to make but you can laugh at it. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite
March 18, 200719 yr its right that its simple but it looks good and its funny so its a very good fake, keep on the good work! Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
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