sheep455_is_the_best Posted March 15, 2007 Share Posted March 15, 2007 Here it is.. Please rate, or post some thoughts. How can i make it better? First: The edit, small spelling errors, made a bit more etc. : [Whip drops: 13] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kn1gh7_K1n6 Posted March 15, 2007 Share Posted March 15, 2007 Not bad, quite simple. Got a few spelling errors, such as 'wacth', 'jume' and 'stucked'. (Watch, Jump, Stuck.) 3rd person to reach 200M Fm Xp ~ Reached on 9th March 2008 Retired 4th August, 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheep455_is_the_best Posted March 15, 2007 Author Share Posted March 15, 2007 Thanks for the comments! My english aint the best, so thanks for the help! Edit: Should i make in the corner like; Jump into sandpit / 2 more options, thingy? [Whip drops: 13] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kn1gh7_K1n6 Posted March 15, 2007 Share Posted March 15, 2007 It's your drawing, entirely up to you =P 3rd person to reach 200M Fm Xp ~ Reached on 9th March 2008 Retired 4th August, 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheep455_is_the_best Posted March 15, 2007 Author Share Posted March 15, 2007 Then ill do it :D But i gotta go to school now.. Edit: Fixed a bit of mistakes, and made a little extra here and there. [Whip drops: 13] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eonrogue Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 the watch the golden coin thing is weird english change watch to see "you see a golden coin in the sand" Tip.it's official Ninja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doomy Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 That looks pretty good...ALot better then i could do anyways Doomy edit: I like sheep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 Hahah, I loll'ed, thats a nice fake. Not hard to make but you can laugh at it. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 its right that its simple but it looks good and its funny so its a very good fake, keep on the good work! Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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