second pixel sig.

 

 

 

this one sucks to.. but oh well

 

 

 

ill get better some day :cry:

 

 

 

Yup, it sucks :cry: It's not the worst ever though.

 

 

 

It doesn't look like signature... It looks just an picture made with Paint.

 

 

 

Leather boots would look better than only rune things.

 

 

 

But, train a lot and you may be someday even good.

those arent sigs, more like avvy, u need a background

u started out well, excellent shading, but dude the legs are messed up

u started out well, excellent shading, but dude the legs are messed up

 

 

 

i didnt mean pixel sig :? i ment char.. sorry for the confusion

 

 

 

:oops:

 

 

 

and about the legs... they are kind of messed up

 

 

 

i just started off with copy pasting them but that didnt feel right ^_^

 

 

 

so i had to distort the other one... but i can change it back to both legs looking the same

 

 

 

and about the boots.. i just thought rune legs would look better without boots... ppl didnt like my boots in my first one

u started out well, excellent shading, but dude the legs are messed up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How can you call that excellent shading?!

 

 

 

Not ment to be harsh, but sometimes I just have to..

 

 

 

The shading is far from excellent.. Its gradient shaded.. It doesnt look 3d..

 

 

 

Try thinking of it as normal objects, are normal things gradient shaded? No.

 

 

 

Think of where the light comes from, where the shadows fall..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, and the legs are done horribly.. Look at your own legs, are they connected to your body the way you drew em?

 

 

 

The pixel guy misses a crotch, legs dont just go straight down..

Small Penis Person

Small Penis Person

 

 

 

well here he is.. now his penis is big :lol: kind of

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

more feedback plz on what to improve

bigger thighs drag ammy?

Um, er..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When you draw, think about perspective and proportion, the body is out of proportion, and the perspective is off as well, most noticeably of all the shield.

Um, er..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When you draw, think about perspective and proportion, the body is out of proportion, and the perspective is off as well, most noticeably of all the shield.

got'cha :)

 

 

 

so the shield should be turned around to face the position the char is in?

 

 

 

which is to the left...

 

 

 

if thats what you ment, i see where your heading at.

 

 

 

if not, sorry for my ignorance.

 

 

 

btw, any tips on how to do it?

 

 

 

i mean. as you can probably see im a newbie :cry:

 

 

 

so what do i have to do? change the shading? shape? in what way exacly?