December 24, 200421 yr Taking comments on this, which is currently entered in a contest, but wanting to get some feedback from folks who rarely check those. I don't do photomanips often.. The precisely requested size.... A larger version.... siggy... Used a free stock photo, and augmented it considerably, etc.... Like the way it turned out. here is the original stock. Used a free stock photo, and augmented it considerably, etc....
December 25, 200421 yr I'd say your text is a bit off... It seems to stretch horizontally more than it should... I would raise the height a bit and then maybe unslant it a tad... I think the face is a bit overburned as well. I'm guessing you were trying to emphasize the helmet - and that's good. But I think losing all that detail on the face is bad. Also, the buttons on the sides of the helmet stick out more than eyes. This is bad too, because on first glance, it makes those buttons look like the eyes, which makes it look like the face is distored. I would probably suggest lightening up the face, and more specifically the area around the eyes; or eliminate the brightness on the buttons. Hope this helps. :) /edit - I just realized that the bright blotch is coming from the cheek bone. I would definitely bring down the brightness on that spot; it wouldn't really be there...
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