CC before I put them up as Deviations, tell me if anything needs to be fixed or worked on.

Im not too keen on the top one, bit too hazy and the bottom ones light on the mountain looks kinda odd :?

Hazy light and odd were kind of what I was going for. :?

I really like the bottom one, dunno why, but the top one reminds me of looking through the window of a dirty fish tank :? .

eep.... sorry but they realy arn't that good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) needs a load of work. For one, having a surface map would be nice. 2nd, the angle, while unique, just doesn't realy look that good and the atmosphere just isn't cutting it for me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2)this ones a bit better, but in my opinion its too contrasting with it's self, and just doesn't realy lead to a good peice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Nadril

eep.... sorry but they realy arn't that good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) needs a load of work. For one, having a surface map would be nice. 2nd, the angle, while unique, just doesn't realy look that good and the atmosphere just isn't cutting it for me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2)this ones a bit better, but in my opinion its too contrasting with it's self, and just doesn't realy lead to a good peice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Nadril

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any suggestions on how to make them better? I get the gist of what your sayign but I am still quite a n00b with the prog, what are ways to get around the atmosphere problem?

 

eep.... sorry but they realy arn't that good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) needs a load of work. For one, having a surface map would be nice. 2nd, the angle, while unique, just doesn't realy look that good and the atmosphere just isn't cutting it for me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2)this ones a bit better, but in my opinion its too contrasting with it's self, and just doesn't realy lead to a good peice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Nadril

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any suggestions on how to make them better? I get the gist of what your sayign but I am still quite a n00b with the prog, what are ways to get around the atmosphere problem?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmm.. i'd say scrap the first one, it doesn't realy have much hope.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For the 2nd first off lower the suns strength by alot. Than give it a nice surface map :P (don't think you realy have) And go from there. It has a slight chance of being saved, sorta.

I didn't save it though so I'll just try to make a new peice lol.

I didn't save it though so I'll just try to make a new peice lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah good idea >_>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck :)

This isn't the first time I posted complete and utter crap. ^_^