Blue Peace- Not really blue but....

[J_Rod_The_Ti]

C&C and ratings pl0z.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[_-HI-_]

looks pretty good :D

 

 

 

little dark thou

 

 

 

8.5/10

[Chounin]

Interesting how the name "blue peace" suggests a more calm, pacifying sig... but blue and orange-brown are clashing colors. You could try making the red background have more definitive shapes, rather than just loops. Like make circles instead perhaps?

[Dyronamics]

Well the design as a whole hits you in the face with the contrasting gentle swirls in the background and the harsh explosion but I dont think it really works very well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The explosion should have a focal point from which everything is coming from but you can see its still an abstract design which has been stretched out in points. It also has an uncomfortable stuck-on look in the way it neither blends or interacts with the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The overall darkness of eveything doesnt help the explosive design whcih I think ought to be bright and almost glowing rather than dull, as if seen through a sheet of smoked glass.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the florescent, semi-transparent green ribbon design in the background though, makes me think of those patterns you can make in the air with glow-sticks.

[Nadril]

Well the design as a whole hits you in the face with the contrasting gentle swirls in the background and the harsh explosion but I dont think it really works very well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The explosion should have a focal point from which everything is coming from but you can see its still an abstract design which has been stretched out in points. It also has an uncomfortable stuck-on look in the way it neither blends or interacts with the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The overall darkness of eveything doesnt help the explosive design whcih I think ought to be bright and almost glowing rather than dull, as if seen through a sheet of smoked glass.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the florescent, semi-transparent green ribbon design in the background though, makes me think of those patterns you can make in the air with glow-sticks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah i'd have to go with what you said. I'm not a huge fan of this peice m8. Mostly because it's inverted as heck :shock: . i'll try and help yah out on it some tommorrow, the basic render there has a LOT of potential.