July 17, 200718 yr The Colours of War The Old Salts Part 1 of the Cadarian Sea Conflict All that could be heard was the deep thrum of The Sea Hawk̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s twin diesel/gas turbines and the mournful creaking of the cabin slowly tilting from left to right. What a bunch of misfits, Alexi Kolmya thought to himself as he surveyed the ships officers before him. Captain Kolmya slowly gazed at each one in turn. He started with Lieutenant Valmir, the weapons department commander. Despite the fact that he was standing rigidly to attention, he seemed poised to leap into action. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSo, Mr Valmir, you are the Weapons Officer.̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Hola
July 17, 200718 yr ...Wow. Amazing so far, and has plenty of detail. The time period is still hazy, but I get a good idea of the characters. So far so good, keep writing. =D> You have no idea how powerful words are....until they hit you in the head.
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