J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 ~Removed temporarily for work~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 29, 2005 Author Share Posted January 29, 2005 Fixed poor Quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColAvanor Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 I'm sorry, but that looks ugly. The "clouds" are flat and have no apparent meaning. The images are badly combined and do not transfer the message. Sorry. :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonking Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 Nice picture it describes our world perfectly ~^v^~Ex-Leader of the Divine Flames of Redemption~^v^~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 29, 2005 Author Share Posted January 29, 2005 I'm sorry, but that looks ugly. The "clouds" are flat and have no apparent meaning. The images are badly combined and do not transfer the message. Sorry. :cry: Hmm... it is a WIP. Well the "clouds" are supposed to represent pollution, I should have made that clear. Do you have any suggesations how I could bring out the meaning more clearly and also make the cliuds less flat? I appreciate you being honest and telling me what you really think, but I need suggestions on how to make it better. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tttia Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tttia Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tttia Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 30, 2005 Author Share Posted January 30, 2005 No the clouds are 100% brushed. I don't use Ps so no filters for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sragral Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 It makes no sense. It looks like a couple of pictures just thrown together. The clouds are just ugly, and what the heck is with the render sticking out of the side? This piece just doesn't have anything going for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Witty-Fool Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 Oooh, Social Pollution. That sounds deep. This would be tolerably good if it weren't trying so hard to fit in the context of digital art. Don't you think it'd be cool if you went around your town with a camera and captured what YOU see/feel? Somethings you can explain. Then put it all together, no need for bad brushing or filters or anything, just put them together in the way that best carries your message; collage, painting, framed photos, anything, ... then submit it. Right now it looks like crap. It looks like it means something, which I find awesome, because most of the art on this forum is just eye candy (mine included, I guess) but it doesn't say the meaning. ~witty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted January 30, 2005 Author Share Posted January 30, 2005 Heh, at the time I didn't have a camera, now I do, so I'm going to do exactly what you said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
entangle Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 Wheres the big filesize? :lol: Terrible blending, overall the image is poor. Quit RS 2005 | RSN: JohnalderBack as of 5/7/2008!Dragon Drops: x1 Med, x5 Legs, x4 Skirts, x25 Boots, x1 Visage | x7 Abyssal Whips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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