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Fixed poor Quality.

I'm sorry, but that looks ugly. The "clouds" are flat and have no apparent meaning. The images are badly combined and do not transfer the message.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry. :cry:

Nice picture it describes our world perfectly

I'm sorry, but that looks ugly. The "clouds" are flat and have no apparent meaning. The images are badly combined and do not transfer the message.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry. :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hmm... it is a WIP. Well the "clouds" are supposed to represent pollution, I should have made that clear. Do you have any suggesations how I could bring out the meaning more clearly and also make the cliuds less flat? I appreciate you being honest and telling me what you really think, but I need suggestions on how to make it better. Thanks.

Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image.

Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image.

Are the clouds filtered? They sure look like it....brush them on...and keep brushing through part of the other image.

No the clouds are 100% brushed. I don't use Ps so no filters for me.

It makes no sense. It looks like a couple of pictures just thrown together. The clouds are just ugly, and what the heck is with the render sticking out of the side? This piece just doesn't have anything going for it.

Oooh, Social Pollution. That sounds deep.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This would be tolerably good if it weren't trying so hard to fit in the context of digital art. Don't you think it'd be cool if you went around your town with a camera and captured what YOU see/feel? Somethings you can explain. Then put it all together, no need for bad brushing or filters or anything, just put them together in the way that best carries your message; collage, painting, framed photos, anything, ... then submit it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Right now it looks like crap. It looks like it means something, which I find awesome, because most of the art on this forum is just eye candy (mine included, I guess) but it doesn't say the meaning.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~witty

Heh, at the time I didn't have a camera, now I do, so I'm going to do exactly what you said.

Wheres the big filesize? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Terrible blending, overall the image is poor.