Well just a little something I whipped up, suggestions would be appreciated.

 

 

 

Awesome drawing I can't really see anything that you could improve on because I don't really have an EYE for drawings

welll...the hair is really off in the back and th right(outr right) arm is crazily misdone betweeb the two bracelt things..and then the legs absoultely throw evrything off...

 

 

 

EDIT: and the angular chin make her seem like a guy :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

good job though :D keep on truckin

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Get R Dun

Looks pretty good :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Onto the list of niggles :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The head looks very boyish up to about the collar, perhaps its the eyes being too dark or that and the short haircut, not sure, but seeing only the head by itself makes you think its going to be a boy until.... yeah.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Travelling down a bit the torso and (her) left arm looks fine, the right looks disturbingly thin at the elbow due to the shading making it appear that the whole width of the arm is what you can see between the edge of her top and the outside edge of her arm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A little more detailing on the fingers would help improve both hands, her right in particular, her left looks ok apart from two fingers which look like they're glued togther.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Something strange with a patch of shading at around her right wrist with a black band then a white band then a shaded line which looks like it might be the cuff of a sleeve if it wasnt for the fact that shes wearing a sleeveless top....?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Belt looks good, ditto skirt, shading seems to have been a bit over-enthusiastic on her inner thigh though... a bit lighter on the shading there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Leg muscles are very odd indeed.... sharp angles like those dont exist on a human body (in normal circumstances). Smooth out her left calf muscle and where it goes behind her knee.... and where her right calf muscle curves in towards her leg again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Both ankles, particularly her left seem to be a bit thin as they enter the shoes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Apart from all that I like the general style and the anatomical shading was reasonably realistic :)

legs look dislocated