LORD OF THE HELMS DEEP - - - PART 1

 

Once upon a time there was a guy named Brady (me :D). This boy was rich he got $1,000,000,000 a day, but one day two boys named Hadhod and Bethrone stood up against him. They knew that Brady owned everything except them and their land (with their mother and father and brothers and sister) so they would repent against this. So lets look at the odds the world against nine people. So the heroes in this story are actually are Hadhod and Bethrone Elgost and Idrel. Hadhod armed with his ax, and his armor (which was actually only cloths) set out toward Florida. Bethrone with his sword and his armor (which was only cloths) set out to Mississippi. So there for the two friends now set out to the end of their lives.

 

 

 

3 Years later

 

 

 

 

 

It had been 3 years since the boys had seen each other now almost hopelessly they fought on not knowing why each thought the other was dead. But one day two traveling weary immigrants met in a forest both running from about 100 guards (BradyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s) these boys, astonished asked "How (huff) are (huff) you (huff) doing?"

 

 

 

Nether of them could really answer because they where so tried. So they ran and ran then the sat down and talked and talked so both of them where a lot more experienced than they where when they left, they each told their stores. But one thing they did not know was someone was watching themÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ In-till' Hadhod noticed that he had been shot!!! Then Bethrone quickly picked up the heavy dwarf and carried to a safe place there he gave him elf medic. (It brings you back to life.) Then after Hadhod knew what happened he wanted to go kill as many orc and orikyi, which Brady also owns. Bethrone also wanted to kill as many as he could but he knew that they had no army. They went on they couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t cover much ground a day with their speed. Then all of the sudden when they were walking, again, they saw something, it was a very weird personÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæit fact it wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t a person at all it was a black rider!!! Bethrone grabbed his sword, Hadhod grabbed the handle of his ax. Then they heard another noise it was behind them they looked up it was himÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ noÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæyesÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæitÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæwasÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæhim it was Brady!!! He had armor on, of the best kind, too. Hadhod was already charging at Brady when Bethrone had pulled out his sword, he tried going to the other side but when he saw what was over the hill Brady was standing on he yelled run!!! There was at least a 100 thousand orc and orikyi!!! He got out his bow when Elgost (BethroneÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s and HadhodÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s brother) said hey thatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s my department as he pulled out his bow. Hadhod just pulled out some small axes and started throwing. So the battle raged on Hadhod laid a couple hits in the crouch. When all Bethrone had to do was slice off the orcs heads. Elgost on the other hand just shot away with his handy dandy bow.

 

 

 

Eventually at the end the three men killed 105 orc and 72 orikyi. They had to run Hadhod had a arrow in his leg, Bethrone had been sliced at the ankle. Elgost didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get hurt at all because he stayed back in a far distance. They were recovered in a couple of hours.

 

 

 

They knew they had to do something. Back in Helms Deep (Pennsylvania) there were more people that didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t like Brady. So there was a battle raging on. The Brady hatters were losing the war, too, thatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s why Bethrone Hadhod and Elgost had to do something. So they decided to go help but, umÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ They didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know where they were. So they went to the nearest mall where everyone stared at them. They looked different because they had battle scares and weapons. So they were chased by millions of crowds and guards. (The crowds and guards that Brady wiped their memory and said he was their leader.) So Hadhod Bethrone and Elgost ran away they couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t go anywhere but they knew they had to get to Helms Deep. The 3 men went through the woods when Bethrone saidÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ "We just walked around this for the 51st time!!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ The three men had to face the factsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ They were lost. Then Hadhod had a said "WaitÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ this is in Pennsylvania!!! Its only 300 yards away from Helms Deep!!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ So in about 5 minutes of running they saw itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæit wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t a war anymoreÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæit was a slaughter. The castle was in flames what left of walls crumbled by trolls' clubs it wasÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæterrifying. Thousands of bodies lay, mostly men or elves Hadhod finally said "WeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re to late we have failedÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ" then, all of the sudden they herd people shouting "There here, were saved!!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ Then they saw the White Wizard Gandalf. He had came in the aid of Helms Deep they had won the battle. Then one of the men decided to throw a party for the killing of BradyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s soldiersÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ(darn) One man told the story of how they won the war and this is how it went "We thought we were all doomed but then we saw clouds come pouring in and then thunder struck, and out comes Gandalf and then some flashey thingey and everything was dead!!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ But then they heard a noise they looked and in the clearing ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ there was an entire army coming toward them it was the elves here to help but whyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ they heard another noise they looked to the other hill... a huge army of BradyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s also charging down the hill....

 

 

 

I will be writing Part 2 soon...

 

 

 

Any suggestions greatly appriciated..

 

 

 

All reviews also greatly appriciated

Waddaya think?

 

 

 

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oops #-o

Lord of Helms Deep Part 2

 

 

 

 

 

As Brady's troops were charging at a steady pace Directly into Helms Deep, (Which was like a canyon a slope on each side and the town right in the middle, but, I wouldn't call it a town after what happened..after all, the walls were torn down and most buildings were destroyed, but they still did call it helms deep.)

 

 

 

 

 

The elves did the same..but they were there to help helms deep not to finish destroying it.. (as Brady's army was) as the two armys of Brady's and Helms Deep's fought in the center of helms deep Brady waited peacfuly up on the hill where his army had went down to fight with helms deep. Gandalf had been kidnapped by a couple of sneaky orikyi, and brought back to Brady's castle, and the orikyi then returned to battle, the elves that were helping Helms Deep were not worried about killing, Brady's troops, they were just trying to defend Helms Deep, as the elves defended Helms Deep, there defences started getting weaker and weaker, while the numbers were around 100,000 elvin troops and 500,000 orc and orikyi, but just as Brady's troops were starting to make a break through the Helms Deep's troops another 200,000 more elvin troops made there way down the hill.

 

 

 

Meanwhile With Hadod, Bethrone, and Elgost

 

 

 

 

 

They made there way around the many orc and orikyi and got up the hill, to see..yes..it..no..it..was..Brady in his best of armor as he usually had on when going into battle, it was as if he was waiting for the three brothers, and he knew they were going to make it up. (definently not hencing at somthing here :wink: ) But as they got up Elgost started to say " you baste- " Hadhod cut him off " Brother, quiet. " Bethrone stood there..quiet, then bethrone out of silence yelled, " ATTACK! " Brady just stood there as they readied there attacks, then as they got ready to attack, a loud bang, followed by a explosion sent the three brothers flying, almost off the cliff, the brothers now lay unconcious.. Brady pittied them and let them live, walking away, as what left of orc and orikyi returned to the castle to celebrate the destrucion of Helms deep, and to kill gandalf, Gandalf ecscaped, got Hadhod, Bethrone, and Elgost, and teleported to his secret area... (it was underground) as Gandalf got there..He treated all three of the brothers, but they died that night, so Gandalf luckily had some Elf Medic (if ure still not shure what that is it brings you back to life) and brought them back to life..as they were revived, they readied there weapons and wanted to go and kill as many orc and orikyi as they could, again. Gandalf stopped them and said if u wish to fight, and die.. I do not have enough Elf medic to bring all of you back to life any more, only enough to bring two of you back to life (it was very rare.) so they stayed in that secret area, for a few weeks, and one day the heavily guarded magic door bursted open killing all of the door guards, and none remain just the three brothers and Gandalf, they all got up backed up a little and stared..it was Brady, and just Brady. None of his troops..Brady got out his blade, which was very ancient, but had great power, and started to walk towards the four, consisting of Gandalf, and the three brothers, all four readied there weapon gandalf got ready to teleport the four, but Brady used a spell to electricute and kill, Gandalf..Brady also destroyed the vials of Elf medic, the brothers redied there weapons..And charged..

 

 

 

Part 3 Coming Soon!!

 

 

 

 

Any suggestions and reviews greatly appriciated!

Part 2 out, working on 3, it will be out in at most 3 days..

A written description of Helm's Deep would be more helpful than a vague diagram. Otherwise, it's pretty good, but try to put more detail.

Bit of a delay (I'll say) got *meep* grounded..so im back now :|

 

and thanks for the tip llamster, i'll get to work with that :

Lord of Helms Deep Part 3

 

 

 

As Hadhod charged, Elgost readied his bow for a shot, and Bethrone went in with his sword, Brady teleported, so the brothers had pritty much wasted their energy..they seithed there weapons.

 

The three brothers thought, " What do we do know.. " Elgost yelled, after a few intense hours of thinking, what they should do.. Build An Army the other two brothers agreed, so they went to a different town..Florida, where the number of people who hate Brady, was steadily increasing..

 

when they arrived in Florida it was of course, too, in a civil war.. The three brothers thought " Damn, not again. " They entered the town gates anyways, went a bit South-West of the town square which was know, at that time as " The Bradbellion " ( best I could do ) the whole Southern half of the State was the " Bradbellion " side, and the Northern half of the State/City place, was the people who followed Brady. The square of the State ( The middle ) was always where the two sides clashed, and Brady's army didn't bother with florida, because Brady said it was too hot..and if he wanted it, he would buy it. :thumbsup: So as the brothers got there, they went straight to the army recruitment area of the rebbelion side, the three brothers asked the head of recruitment if they could recruit there, he said no, so of course..desprate needs call for desprate measures ( or however that goes ) so they roughed him up, and then..of course.. recruited. :wink: They ended up getting and army of 100 the first day. (which was pritty big considering this state had only about 4,000 people in it, and 2,000 of them left) Then, the sky got very dark.. everyone stopped fighting, to gaze at the sky, they look over by the brick and iron gates, and seen Brady's army approaching, which consisted of about 2 million orc, and orikyi. ( The President wouldn't sell Florida because it was at civil war, and brady figure it would be good for tourists. ) Behind Brady's army, they saw millions of Elven, and Dwarven Soldiers.. The three brothers realized that it wasn't a fight for florida, it was a fight for all of USoA...

 

 

 

 

 

This one will end kinda soon, but i probably will come back and edit it a couple times before making the new " mini-series "

 

 

 

The Sew Series to Come -vv-

 

 

 

Depths of USoA

 

 

 

 

 

All reviews, and suggestions are greatly appriciated

Working on the new series part one now.. gimme a few days