Merry Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 I'm not the kind of girl who walks around in malls wearing trendy clothes like those manikin dolls I'm not a flirt I don't play that game don't wear a mini skirt (I think that's lame!) I'm not that kind of girl and their "trendy" clothes make me want to hurl I'm not the type that goes blah blah blah On a cell phone or who spends money at a spa Their so ditzy, their minds been blown I'm not in their Clique I'm all my own I'm not that kind of chick I like my way its all my own I'd never change it any day let them laugh at the way I dress I'd rather be laughed at then get into that mess! My PoetryA short story: THE INTRUDERA Short Story:Jerrel the Jester Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 Not bad, sounds more like a rap than a poem. I quite liked it actually, different style to alot of the people who use this part of the forum. Variety is a good thing, well done. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForsakenMage Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 You show em who you really are. :D Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 You show em who you really are. :D I really must agree. Or if you prefer me to switch to my more feminine side, "You go girl!" 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merry Posted February 14, 2005 Author Share Posted February 14, 2005 I appreciate your appreciation for my poetry. I did not try to make it sound like a rap song. it just seemed to come out that way I guess(even though I don't even listen to rap, I prefer rock). Thank you for saying its different. I like being different and I wouldn't change it for anything.Sometimes Poeple's Poetry seems so *for lack of better word* Generic. Most of the time my poetry or writing in general Just comes out without much thought of where it's headed. haha! This was I think the most fun I had with a poem. My PoetryA short story: THE INTRUDERA Short Story:Jerrel the Jester Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 I appreciate your appreciation for my poetry. I did not try to make it sound like a rap song. it just seemed to come out that way I guess(even though I don't even listen to rap, I prefer rock). Thank you for saying its different. I like being different and I wouldn't change it for anything.Sometimes Poeple's Poetry seems so *for lack of better word* Generic. Most of the time my poetry or writing in general Just comes out without much thought of where it's headed. haha! This was I think the most fun I had with a poem. Hehe, it happens, I myself prefer the emo/rock genre of music but detest rap. Alot of my poems sound like raps though. Off topic: I'm thinking of posting a poem/story when I can stop being lazy and get round to doing it, depends if people want to see one from me though. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merry Posted February 14, 2005 Author Share Posted February 14, 2005 Hehe, it happens, I myself prefer the emo/rock genre of music but detest rap. Alot of my poems sound like raps though. I don't quite detest it, I can stand it...If I am forced at gunpoint to listen to it! But I prefer Rock. I'm thinking of posting a poem/story when I can stop being lazy and get round to doing it, depends if people want to see one from me though. :P I Think it would be nice to see one. So when your laziness subsides know that atleast one person would appreciate a glimpse of your creative writing. My PoetryA short story: THE INTRUDERA Short Story:Jerrel the Jester Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhys Posted February 14, 2005 Share Posted February 14, 2005 Heh, thanks for your positive remark, I might start writing something soon... If my laziness permits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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