A Tale of Five Knights

[Slacker815]

This story is based pre- current day RuneScape. Post any critisism, discuss, ect. In the first post is the complete first story, if you like it or are interested in perhaps a sequel or a completely different story I may make one (based on in-game RS NPC Characters or my own). Thanks. :)

 

 

 

****A TALE OF FIVE KNIGHTS****

 

By Slacker815

 

 

 

Sir Amik Varze strode out into the afternoon sun in Falador Square. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅOh, what a great day,ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[powerent]

You told them to post, so do I. I have to say, this is a very good story with an interesting plot, even though I would have found it more suspenseful if you'd split the posts into 1 or 2 chapters for 1 post. It would then appear slightly longer and people would have more time to respond. Keep writing stories, you're pretty good at them.

[Slacker815]

Thanks. I thought about doing it in parts, but I wanted to do this first story and see what people thought about it.

[Spirit_666a2]

Well written... I enjoyed this story. But... Sir Amik Varze is not the king, King Valence is, but he is away on important buisiness in far away lands.

 

 

 

Also, how did the other knights get out of their chairs in the headquarters?

 

 

 

Otherwise, this was a great story. Really explains alot.

[Slacker815]

The Knights were cut free by Tiffy. Also the part where the Druid calls Amik the King was out of respect for saving the town, for he is doing all of the kingly duties while Vallance is away.

 

 

 

We also don't know if Vallance is on important buisness far away, for all we know he could be locked up in a chamber in the White Knight castle.