01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 Well ive done a couple of sigs... not all of them are finished but I would like you to rate... I mostly did all the backgrounds.... but Neanderslave did some of the ppl.. i also did all of the colouring and most of the shading. These I did completly by myself ~For sale ~ For sale ~ For sale These Neanderslave Helped With ~ For Sale This 1 MWR did the shading.. Neanderslave..the person and the fire giant 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnePercenter Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 Cool, last one is the best. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bmagic Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 you need to learn how to draw with more depth for example u can try drawing your objects below the ground Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 wat do u mean..... draw stuff underground? 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 0pps d0uble p0st 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bmagic Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 u see that the trees is above the green u should try making so it looks more like the first one when the guy isnt standing on top of the ground Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnePercenter Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 Yeah, cause the ground is never that flat :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 Ok here's what i can say about your works... First thing i noticed, even earlier than the quality i'll speak about later on, is the total lack of a concept in your sigs...How can a granite maul in a green field make a sig on its own ? You must develop a kind of "story" or situation in your sigs, else it's just an illustration of an item or a place... On the graphical side you'r far behind the running standards of first tries in this board. Actualy all these should be allright for a 1st try but i can see you didn't make much progress from 1st to last, while the learning curve in pixels, at least for me, appeared to be very very fast at the beginning, so quite huge improvements should be noticed from 1st to last, unless you made all of them in a rush without stopping for a while to listen to some c/c or simply compare your works to those of the other ppls around here, pointing out what you were missing in each work.... For example in all these pieces you can notice a minimal palette, almost no shading and pretty odd anathomy in the chars, lack of detail, trembling linework...bla bla bla... In other words i think your works are a bit of an headhache on every aspect...so you should realy work harder next time you open your paint. Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 Right.... first a friend is doing the people cos i cant draw ppl... 2nd... if u look at other ppls first sigs... such as razzzzas.. then i think mines a little better.. 3rd... im still practacing so im getting better 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 Right.... first a friend is doing the people cos i cant draw ppl... 2nd... if u look at other ppls first sigs... such as razzzzas.. then i think mines a little better.. 3rd... im still practacing so im getting better 4th if you don't want feedback don't make such posts...plus you should try to work to reach the top, not to stand 1 step above the worst....just my opinion however... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 i want feedback... but helpful feedback.. such as what bmagic said.. not just saying... stuff like: On the graphical side you'r far behind the running standards of first tries in this board i think your works are a bit of an headhache on every aspect... I tried hard on these and all u say is... Oo its terrible... it doesnt make me feel too good about myself.. 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 i want feedback... but helpful feedback.. such as what bmagic said.. not just saying... stuff like: On the graphical side you'r far behind the running standards of first tries in this board i think your works are a bit of an headhache on every aspect... I tried hard on these and all u say is... Oo its terrible... it doesnt make me feel too good about myself.. Are you joking ? did you notice how long my C/C is ? I spent a good amount of time writing it and i gave you a real C/C. You didn't get what you expected ? maybe then you needed to open your eyes on your works so that from now on you can actualy focus on some improvements. Nothing i wrote down implied the concept "Give up you noob" or something like that. The main problem is that if you 'r asked to give a feedback, you have to do it. Adding sugar to the pill usualy ends up being a problem rather than an help. If something was wrong in my C/C was that it lacked this sentence : "Keep trying, you'll get better". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bmagic Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 i want feedback... but helpful feedback.. such as what bmagic said.. not just saying... stuff like: On the graphical side you'r far behind the running standards of first tries in this board i think your works are a bit of an headhache on every aspect... I tried hard on these and all u say is... Oo its terrible... it doesnt make me feel too good about myself.. Are you joking ? did you notice how long my C/C is ? I spent a good amount of time writing it and i gave you a real C/C. You didn't get what you expected ? maybe then you needed to open your eyes on your works so that from now on you can actualy focus on some improvements. Nothing i've wrote down implied the concept "Give up you noob" or something like that. The main problem is that if you 'r asked to give a feedback, you have to do it. Adding sugar to the pill usualy ends up being a problem rather than an help. If something was wrong in my C/C was that it lacked this sentence : "Keep trying, you'll get better". white he is give c/c you have a lot to learn from him you just have to ignore some of the insults in between Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 white he is give c/c you have a lot to learn from him you just have to ignore some of the insults in between Mmm i don't realy think there are insults in my C/Cs nor there's supposed to be a single one. If it looks like that, then i apologize. However what i was trying to remark is that he still needs to improve in his sigs. If he lets his friends make what he can't do, he'll never improve his skills. Now the point is...if i wrote it down this calm and relaxed way the first time, would he realy stop and think about it for 1 second ? I think no.... Anyway i'm always open to pms from ppl that wants to talk about pixels or get some private C/Cs. (Just don't send 10 pms a day :wink: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NACHO Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 i want feedback... but helpful feedback.. such as what bmagic said.. not just saying... stuff like: On the graphical side you'r far behind the running standards of first tries in this board i think your works are a bit of an headhache on every aspect... I tried hard on these and all u say is... Oo its terrible... it doesnt make me feel too good about myself.. so what i understand is you want praised for your sigs without anyone saying the negative sides to them. to me they all look the same, it doesn't look as though they improved at all. maybe you should start taking your time on these sigs, they look like they take about 5 minutes. Sometimes i spend hours upon hours just getting the shading of a few things right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 no bmagic said that i should add depth to my work.... that was helpful... Are you joking ? did you notice how long my C/C is ? .... quality is better than quantity :wink: any i found some of the things u said a bit harsh.... i mean u said it was a headache.... and also i am learning from my mistakes... im cleaning up my linework.. im also praticing drawing ppl.. 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 nacho.... they took alot longer than 5mins...... i spent a lot of time on them... but remember im only just starting them 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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