Hey decided to rewrite the old work, based on some choice words by Xweeler. So here goes nothing. Oh and I will probably be continuing this format. Although the colours may change...

 

On the rules issue...Its my story...I came up with the name, plot and most of the text, and since someone else controls half the first chapter, which I have permission to use, it will be alot easier to rewrite on a seperate thread. Anyone who has read *Aura Wars* will only have a slight advantage, I plan to improve every line and word, and probably change the course of the story a number of times...So this isn't just a reposting of old ideas, Jazzed up. This is the Runescape 2.0 compared to the classic version...New things, new graphics, new bugs...Err well new updates too. Enjoy.

 

Addtionally: Some pictures are not mine, they have been ripped from free things so...Genforge 4 and Runescape thus yet I am aware of.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good idea. I think that the beginning of the original "Aura Wars" was horrible.

I hope you like this one a bit more...since you were not excatly specific I changed everything a little bit.

not bad, personally, I didn't mind the beginning much.

 

 

 

Hey, who said the first quote in your signature? Its correct yet incorrect, thus, incorrect, but who am I to say?

Updated once again.

 

Both quotes are my own invention. The second is based on Isaiah 50.

 

Just seemed like it made sense.

 

Any feed back would be nice.

It's very nice so far. Great battle scenes.

Thats good to know. I felt that they sort of degenerated to something from anime. But if you like it then I will carry on with it.