Solo Pker - MUST Read/Listen!

[Jesse627]

PLEASE RATE ME, I NEED INSPIRATION TO CONTINUE :) COME ON!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, I finally set me up a beat and rapped this rap. So if you want to hear it just click the link below or right click -> save as. REMEMBER TO READ THE LYRICS AS THE SONG PLAYS, SO OPEN THE MUSIC FILE IN A NEW WINDOW!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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NOTE! - For BEST results follow the lyrics WHILE listening to the song!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please rate me :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

--------------===Wildy Rap===--------------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm on my way to the wildy zone,

 

 

 

I don't need friends, I can pk alone.

 

 

 

Its a good night, lit with many moons,

 

 

 

OH CRAP! I forgot to pack ma tele runes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I guess tonight Imma get down and dusty

 

 

 

Its been a while so I'm a lil rusty.

 

 

 

I pass up varrock on ma way to the altar,

 

 

 

Then I feel the presence of a lone stalker.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I turn around quicky,

 

 

 

Remove my sword swiftly,

 

 

 

Noob here staring at my armor like its nifty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm quick to take a dose of ma strength potion,

 

 

 

I killed him so fast, it plays quick in slow motion.

 

 

 

All of sudden a pile appears,

 

 

 

Just a defence ammy and a few beers.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So Im back on my way, grin on my face,

 

 

 

Feeling good, traveling at a pretty nice pace,

 

 

 

This dude runs pass with a name "The #1 Ace"

 

 

 

Then I shot a few arrows towards his pale face.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He starts typing, "No plz sir dont kill me again,"

 

 

 

"Is there some chance you might let me win?"

 

 

 

He starts attacking, saying hes the slayer,

 

 

 

Thats when I remember I still have ma prayer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I turn it on, defence from melee,

 

 

 

Chop and Diced till he feel weakly.

 

 

 

Im kinda tired with all this hastle,

 

 

 

Its about time to check out the castle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I got there, I walked straight in,

 

 

 

3 Rangers lookin, searching for ma friend,

 

 

 

To bad they don't know, Im pking solo,

 

 

 

They ask If I'm scared, I reply with a hell no..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is the part where I get kinda worried,

 

 

 

This is where they wish they had hurried,

 

 

 

By the time they shot, I already said gimme,

 

 

 

Now its time for them to meet ma scimmy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So thats it folks, I grabbed what I could,

 

 

 

Only fella left in this wildy neighborhood.

 

 

 

I head straight south, going to edgeville,

 

 

 

Then I hear a whisper "Please Stay Still"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I looked to ma left, and there they are,

 

 

 

They weren't close, but not to far.

 

 

 

It was two little noobs, all alone,

 

 

 

I guess today, they'll be going home.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I run to attack them, and from outta the blue,

 

 

 

Some mages come at me, not one but two!

 

 

 

I didn't know their levels were a little hightened,

 

 

 

This is the part where I get a little frightened.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

They charge me, fire blasts in every direction,

 

 

 

Telling me how its time I learn my lesson.

 

 

 

I guess its about that time where I get killed,

 

 

 

Pking just must not be my skill.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I get the message "Oh Dear, You're Dead"

 

 

 

I feel a few sharp stings in ma head.

 

 

 

So what if I lost some weapons, a cape, and armor,

 

 

 

Think of all the people that went through my horror.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But thats alright, because I'll be okay.

 

 

 

You'll see me right back, the very next day.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

--------------===The End===--------------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please rate this 1-10, and tell what you think. If you would like me to write more raps about anything in Runescape, tell me and I'll be glad to do it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When you post, and your rating it tell me if you just read it or you read and listened to it thanks! Im just curious.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-=Jesse=-

[Jesse627]

Anyone?

[DahVid]

Pretty good, but some of the transitions are to "breathy." 8/10 for the song and 8/10 for the lyrics.. Good job!

[Jesse627]

anyone else gonna rate?

[Uno545454]

Pretty good, like he said. I suggest you get a pop filter so you ain't gottta worry about the pop of your beath and if you can't afford a pop filter, grab a clothes hanger and some pantyhose, put them over the hanger and hold it infront of the mic.. I did that for a while.. 7/10