rate and give advise plz

 

 

 

http://img86.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img86&im ... ishguy.png

Try giving us the right link.

just changed it

CC:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Background too bland, and too bright. It hurts my eyes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The guy has fat arms, torso and skinny legs. Fingers are odd. His head is twice as big as another guy's head. Or that rune helm thingy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

window needs a wooden border around it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wow that room is really empty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shouldn't the light source come from the window? iono.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Amulets are like floating on the wall? I don't see no nail or wahtever they're hanging on. Door needs hinges and doesn't look like wood.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Objects in the gold pile don't look "embedded" in the gold

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey good job on the clean lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The gold mound is too..smooth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I can't make out the rune-ish looking thing behind the gold mound.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yup thats my CC :D

 

 

 

pretty good put more detail into it

the phats look corny, and so does the plume fo the helm, its to small

Its pretty good. But I suggest changing the wall colour and getting rid of the big SAMPLE , so i can see it more clearly. Put your name or something small in the corner instead.

or just put the opacity way down