ForsakenMage Posted March 15, 2005 Share Posted March 15, 2005 Aestas Sol Prologue It began to rain. For many months the tiny village of Yenway suffered a long, serious drought. Many of its people had already fled north to the Crest. Those that stayed barely managed to get by. Some had fallen ill and died due to liver damage; alcohol was the only thing left in the cellars to quench their thirst. Others were killed by desperate monsters in the barren fields in search for food. The few survivors remaining broke bread with each other and did what little they could for each other. By now, the village reeked of dust. The smell of rotting bodies hung in the air. It seemed the rain came too late. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅFatherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve finally come to save me.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirith_knight Posted March 15, 2005 Share Posted March 15, 2005 Hmm, sounds like her father and this man are vampires. Nice intro, you made the little girl sound sweet, even in the face of death, just wanted to go to heaven. Kind of sad. Sounds like it should be intresting, a friend recommended a book called All Just Glass earlier today. A vampire type story as well, was really considering reading, but someone had borrowed from the library. Had to settle for a Dean Koontz. I'll be sure to read the first chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForsakenMage Posted March 17, 2005 Author Share Posted March 17, 2005 Chapter 1: Dawn AestasÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ father, Aaron, stood up from his stoop over his daughter. His fangs dripped mercifully of blood, her blood that he drank to save her. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHeaven forgive me for my ways and give my daughter life. This was the only way I could save her.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orunge Posted March 18, 2005 Share Posted March 18, 2005 looking good :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForsakenMage Posted March 22, 2005 Author Share Posted March 22, 2005 Chapter 2: Morning ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou blubbering idiots! You scoundrels! You murderers!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orunge Posted March 23, 2005 Share Posted March 23, 2005 awwww.... thats so happy. i know something bad is abouty to happen :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForsakenMage Posted March 28, 2005 Author Share Posted March 28, 2005 Chapter 3: Noon ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAh, here we are. Try it on.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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