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mmmmmmmmh practice does a lot :lol:

joke right? :?

joke right? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont be a [bleep] head. :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

um, try shading and more detail. id say get rid of the people they look flat like there on paper, um the wall needs more details so does the floor, pracitce character more and how to make them look 3D

I actualy pretty much agree with Ran...

watever... i give up... not worth it...

*Spam* practice does a lot :lol:

 

 

 

what i mean was that he have to do a lot of practice

 

*Spam* practice does a lot :lol:

 

 

 

what i mean was that he have to do a lot of practice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dosnt matter.. im not offended... i just fell no motivation

All pixelers werent great at the starting, it takes time :roll:

HAHA :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sry but I would try to help but listing all the things wrong with that would take ages....sry man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice! :lol:

HAHA :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sry but I would try to help but listing all the things wrong with that would take ages....sry man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

o its no problem... but thx for bein an [wagon] :)

 

HAHA :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sry but I would try to help but listing all the things wrong with that would take ages....sry man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

o its no problem... but thx for bein an * :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well you posted for constructive criticism and i"ll give it to you. You need to desperately working on the anatomy. I suggest picking up a few books or using the internet to look for it. What I like to do is draw a rough out line of the characters, and then add detail such as muscles and what not, then smooth it out. As for shading, well I couldn't see any in yours, you need to work on that. I suggest using Elvy's or Quer_skull's guide. Next for the bg, it's empty, it's boring, it's poorly done. You want the characters to be your focal point but you want the bg not to be empty. Optimization of space is key for pixeling. Such look at TJ's sigs, the character is the focal point but his bg's are shockingly simple yet complex. He does a very good job. Now what you'll need to do is also not use the line tool, it's not good unless you really need it.

Hmm dont be mean guys, hell look at my first pixel attempt:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And my most recent linework:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And my most recent shading is on teenage losers thread on new linework

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dont give up, thereso nly room to improve you know :P

i dont realy like making em any more... it was fun for awhile but i guess im just not the artistic type... ill just keep skatin

excersise is always better... and

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anatomy

 

 

 

shading

 

 

 

linework

 

 

 

gfetting the pooint acrosss

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats what you need to work on ^

I figure... i need to redo it... but i realy dont know what all i can learn... ive tryed all the tutorials... quer skulls, evys and others from google... dunno what to do