Good proportion, needs more shading and more stuff in the backround and eye's. The sky should be lighter also.

This may seem harsh, but please listen. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

First off I'd like to say the parts you have done are not bad at all for a first pixel, and at least it's not stock colors.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C|C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Finish the face.

 

 

 

-Move the whole picture to a side, pictures with the focal point in dead center are BORING. There's no movement.

 

 

 

-Make it busier in the BG.

 

 

 

-Don't make it so ... straight-edged. This isn't TANGRAMS. You can have curves in the BG, too.

 

 

 

-Clean up your lines a little until you learn to AA.

 

 

 

-You're light sources are off. One is from Behind, one from the Right. (Still, it's 99.34% closer than most's first... and tenth tries)

 

 

 

-The text is not pretty. It's Rather appalling, actually.

 

 

 

-DETAILS. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Overall I give the sig:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Normal standards : 3\10

 

 

 

First Try : 9\10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mr Potential, practice makes perfect.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Miss Queen Rach

kk but any suggestion for backround im braindead

Then what good are you? be creative and try to imagine a backround, try to make it YOURS.

Just avoid the conventional. Think outside the box is all I can say. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Creativity scores much higher than talent in my book.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-ZIMMZY

omg.. very plain where is the sun? why is it dark? why is the person so pale? and why does he have no pants on? only good part is the shadows. just like please think of something better and creative. why not have the branch fall on top of him while the axe hangs in the tree? add detail please.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thank you

he is wearing pants :?

 

 

 

my first one and im not creative

If your not creative then i suggest you stop right now and quit making pixel sigs or for that matter any other form of art, writting, role playing, etc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please get out of these forums if you still think your not creative.

If your not creative then i suggest you stop right now and quit making pixel sigs or for that matter any other form of art, writting, role playing, etc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please get out of these forums if you still think your not creative.

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yea just be funney is what i meant or make it serious or carefree *peacefull* not just plain.

I see a new quote coming! :D

erm i kinda meant at the moment but good to see ur new quote and any suggestions........

Surely you can think of something. does a forest ring a bell? or maybe a shack? Perhaps fellow woodcutters? Noob Woodcutters that cant cut wood? A yew falling on a noob? Smokey the bear? A fire? Pkers with hatchets? A person on a cell phone? ME???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Im telling you the possiblites are endless (Not the ones that make sense but..) it cant be hard to think of one, do i detect lazyness?

A sun doesnt always be have to be in an outdoor scene Auricora... Suns are kinda cheesy actualy.

you need to add a shadow for the axe stuck in the stump