The_Bacon_Man Posted October 18, 2007 Share Posted October 18, 2007 One of my few attempts at poetry. The form is Terza Rima, which I first used in an assignment in school, and it stuck. I really don't care much about meter & footage, but I like the rhyme scheme. So, give me some criticism, but know I did this in all of about 20 minutes near 11:00 PM. The journey of few, The journey known well, My journey, with you, We cannot dwell, We cannot leave, Hear not our farewell, But we must beleive, But we must stand tall, Take what we receive, For we will not fall, For we will hold on, Just you, I, at their call Until the golden dawn When we will both be gone. Tetris is about using the equal force of the working power to build up the glorious people's republic of Russia.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LolzEditor Posted October 19, 2007 Share Posted October 19, 2007 I love the style of the poem, but where is the journey to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanGM Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 I like it, its different from the poetry I read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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