October 21, 200718 yr Note: Haiku is a non rhyming poems with 17 sylabells in three lines. It is USUALLY divided into 5/7/5 sylabells, but it can be varied ____________________ Orange sphere rose- light shone on glistening ripples sparkling azure. ___________________ Morning spring breeze- flowers bloom- pink petals flutter gently wavering. ___________________ Icy sheet of frost- smooth as the glass through which I peered. beautiful white. ___________________ Gentle green grass- gazing up at the cloudless blue sheet- motionless I lay. __________________ Engulf blackened wood silent as tiger prowling red glow flicker strong. ___________________ Rolling dirt cloud dark brown settling on skin stinging fragile eyes. ___________________ Warm summer breeze- bring vivid memories of joy- happiness destroyed. ___________________ Stars twinkle brightly lights dim with my dying faith- midnight- I waited. ___________________ Carcass carried away- The body was gone but his scent still lingered. ____________________ Bright blue crack opens black sky- slitting dark clouds- like the crack in my heart. ____________________
October 21, 200718 yr I've always liked your poems! Nine kittens out of ten! Maybe you should make a topic that has all of them in it, like archimage, to save space.. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
October 21, 200718 yr Author Yea, I should, but in archimage's post it says: posted consistently in Varrok Library for two years or more. I've only been here for half a month or so. Yay 9 kittens ^.^
October 22, 200718 yr They're quite good. You should keep writing poetry like this, especially haikus. There are also the response poems (forgot the names!) that are two lines long. These were mostly used by lovers in Japan to decide whether they should marry (or so I believe, I may be wrong). You have no idea how powerful words are....until they hit you in the head.
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