Well i made this for Mastersoldie, and he hasn't posted yet on who's won, so i'm posting here to get general feedback ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wher?

It's showing up on both my comps, should show up there.

I dont like rating things but ill say it needs more shading

bad anatomy and needs some help with perspective, your char that is laying on the ground looks like he is pinned to a wall which is infact, the ground.

I dont like rating things but ill say it needs more shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More shading in General, or specific places? I tryed a wee bit to shade the torso, i'm goign to add too it later. I also kind have given up on shading the bg more. It's given me nothing but trouble.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tried to make the dead guy not so "nailed to a wall" ;P lol Thanks for the C/C i'm working on that and hopefull it'll help the contest. I also shaded the guy a wee bit more

wher?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lmao :lol: