Hello syrup4 again i have done my latest one and i am just wondering what you guys think i could do to make it better before i colour/shade it TY and please remember its only my 3rd; also if anyone out there knows how to make it look less fake and straight(like line in middle with front of everything else) please help me. TY all so much :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am also wondering if i should keep the arrows?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey just some advice with the background.. The castle and little characters are great but just make the horizon line a bit more bumpy, and add layers of small hills behind it to make it look less blocky.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry for doin this but I just had to show ya wat I mean..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im not tryin to do it for ya just tryin to help.

wow thank you so much thats what ive bene wondering for so long how to make it less square.TY; oh and do u mind if i use that one or should i draw the hills myself?

wow thank you so much thats what ive bene wondering for so long how to make it less square.TY; oh and do u mind if i use that one or should i draw the hills myself?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DRAW THEM YOURSELF :wink:

ya i will i want it to be mine anyways but thanx terley

nobody has any other ideaS??

The alive guy looks great, but the dead guy is off. The camera angle is above the corpse, so you would actually see most of his front side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To give you a better idea of what I am talking about, I made a quick sketch in paint.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Again, this is just a quick drawing to give you a better idea of the perspective. The legs in my drawing are kind of wrong. (Once a guy dies, his feet dont point in the air.) But, I think you get the idea. If you don't get what I mean...I guess I could make a more detailed drawing of what the corpse needs to look like.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

**EDIT** Also, the bow looks a little weird right now, but i think that will look better once you get to shading it.

ty i will keep that in mind for my next one( i think its to late for this one already coloured and mostly shaded)

i suppose an expression on the main characters face might help?