syrup4 Posted April 21, 2005 Share Posted April 21, 2005 Hello syrup4 again i have done my latest one and i am just wondering what you guys think i could do to make it better before i colour/shade it TY and please remember its only my 3rd; also if anyone out there knows how to make it look less fake and straight(like line in middle with front of everything else) please help me. TY all so much :wink: I am also wondering if i should keep the arrows? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted April 21, 2005 Share Posted April 21, 2005 Hey just some advice with the background.. The castle and little characters are great but just make the horizon line a bit more bumpy, and add layers of small hills behind it to make it look less blocky. Sorry for doin this but I just had to show ya wat I mean.. im not tryin to do it for ya just tryin to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
syrup4 Posted April 21, 2005 Author Share Posted April 21, 2005 wow thank you so much thats what ive bene wondering for so long how to make it less square.TY; oh and do u mind if i use that one or should i draw the hills myself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FadeRmx Posted April 21, 2005 Share Posted April 21, 2005 wow thank you so much thats what ive bene wondering for so long how to make it less square.TY; oh and do u mind if i use that one or should i draw the hills myself? DRAW THEM YOURSELF :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
syrup4 Posted April 21, 2005 Author Share Posted April 21, 2005 ya i will i want it to be mine anyways but thanx terley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
syrup4 Posted April 21, 2005 Author Share Posted April 21, 2005 nobody has any other ideaS?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myweponsg00d Posted April 21, 2005 Share Posted April 21, 2005 The alive guy looks great, but the dead guy is off. The camera angle is above the corpse, so you would actually see most of his front side. To give you a better idea of what I am talking about, I made a quick sketch in paint. Again, this is just a quick drawing to give you a better idea of the perspective. The legs in my drawing are kind of wrong. (Once a guy dies, his feet dont point in the air.) But, I think you get the idea. If you don't get what I mean...I guess I could make a more detailed drawing of what the corpse needs to look like. **EDIT** Also, the bow looks a little weird right now, but i think that will look better once you get to shading it. Need assistance in any of these skills? PM me in game, my private chat is always ON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
syrup4 Posted April 21, 2005 Author Share Posted April 21, 2005 ty i will keep that in mind for my next one( i think its to late for this one already coloured and mostly shaded) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted April 22, 2005 Share Posted April 22, 2005 i suppose an expression on the main characters face might help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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