December 22, 200718 yr Okay, this is my first fake picture ever... It's nothing really special. You can rate it, but I would really like to know what I can improve on. Be harsh. And I'm pretty sure that the five hit splats wouldn't be positioned like that, but hey, it's a fake :D And the health bar is like that because it goes below zero... I think that may be hard to understand :wall: And yes, that is me shooting me. One shot that hasn't even landed yet with five hits. I must rock. When I see people say it, I pronounce it "poon" in my head. Makes more sense to me. My friend said it in real life once and I almost kneed him in the family-maker.$DO || ! $DO ; trytry: command not found
December 22, 200718 yr Lower the health bar and change the proportions on it, it looks really off. The text on the archer is a bit high (I think, even for the archer helmet), and yes, the hits on the victim are wrong but have a nice design so you can probably keep that the way it is. And, I hate to say that, but it's not the funniest fake in the world...But hey, don't sweat it; this is your first fake. Plenty of time for improvement. 7.2/10
December 22, 200718 yr Author Well, thanks for the help. I'm editing it now :) But honestly, I wasn't trying to make it very funny, I just wanted to give a fake a shot. These are pretty fun to make though... I'll be posting better ones! :D What I figure now is just to leave the bar green instead of making it go below zero... Easier and better looking... When I see people say it, I pronounce it "poon" in my head. Makes more sense to me. My friend said it in real life once and I almost kneed him in the family-maker.$DO || ! $DO ; trytry: command not found
Create an account or sign in to comment