Right then, this will be going into my new sig somehow (no, not the one under my post) and I'm looking for crits on how to make it better, before it's finalized into my sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So, tell me what you like (what to keep doing) and what you dislike (what I should stop / change). 1/10 ratings are useless to me. K? Thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(When it reaches sig form it will be either that on a transperant background with nice text and a border, or that on an abstract background with nice text and a border. :lol: )

I like it. your characters are soo... realistic. thumbs up.. the only thing is that the right arm (from our point of view) is too straight, maybe make him more relaxed, though it all depends on what he's doing.

Hmm..I should always take crits, and it usualy seems kinda lame when I make excuses, so I'll just say this: I like it. He's casting a spell, his body is rigid with the strain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm listening to Coldplay.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yep.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Who cares?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dunno, but people with longer posts seem more profound.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In your face, people who actualy fill their posts with content.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm done now.

hey, just trying to help... :(

hey, I'm just trying to be lazy and defend the reasonings behind my peice... :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

..>.>

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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:lol: I'm not being mean you know, take stuff more lightly, if you weren't being sarcastic.

Head is proportionally too small compared to the rest of the body, I suggest also changing your topic titles to something more humble of an artist.

I don't understand your comment on my title? There's not much I can do about the head, erm, it seems fine.

I like it, but there's a reason heads are normally drawn quite big, and I'd like to think it's cause that's normally where most of the detail goes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In a small image such as a sig you normally have to make big heads to cram emotion and recognisable features into it, and that is lacking in your images. It's maybe more real this way, and it's certainly your style, but maybe try it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not really much more to crit right now, since you're gonna do more, and don't consider this a finished product likely to require much more attention.