NACHO Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 tell me what you think, and if i should keep making this style or just quit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldeon Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 like the simplicity and the design just bad color choices find something better and it will be awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 don't quit, but yeah like aldeon said, colors dont' work too well with each other and the font is very good. but the design looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyronamics Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 centre the J272 over the arrow Superknight/Blademaster: Level 150; Hps: 132Theoretical damage per round: 234Highest recorded damage in one round: 104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 Its good, only the colors that dont go... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 Holy [cabbage] my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyronamics Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 Holy cabbage my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible. I wouldn't put it that way but the gradient on the background reaaally doesn't go well with the plain (bright) colours Superknight/Blademaster: Level 150; Hps: 132Theoretical damage per round: 234Highest recorded damage in one round: 104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted June 15, 2005 Share Posted June 15, 2005 Gradient or not, that's still going to look ugly. It's needs a complete color overhaul to be somewhat eyepleasing. Also, you obviously drew some of these shapes and upscaled them, so you have some serious problems on the edges, specifically that yellow rounded rectangle. It looks like it was smaller and he tried to distort it in perspective mode. The city thing doesn't look half bad but there are too many elements going on. I see what looks like a mushroom head, and a flower. Then the yellow rectangle has a split down the middle for no apparent reason, it would be different if other shapes had the same identifying quality to them. The lines in the background are an attempt at composition and they work pretty well. But again, I refuse to properly critique this piece until it is properly color corrected. How's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NACHO Posted June 16, 2005 Author Share Posted June 16, 2005 ty for the advice everyone, especially the thoroughly detailed list by keiphus. You could have said the first post a little nicer, but brutal honosty helps me realize that i need to improve it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted June 16, 2005 Share Posted June 16, 2005 Holy cabbage my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible. *Laughs. Alot. Dies.* *person walks by casket, is supried from an undead cackle of glee* :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 ty for the advice everyone, especially the thoroughly detailed list by keiphus. You could have said the first post a little nicer, but brutal honosty helps me realize that i need to improve it a lot. A perfect example of how people are supposed to take criticism. Keep working at it, NACHO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts