tell me what you think, and if i should keep making this style or just quit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

like the simplicity and the design just bad color choices find something better and it will be awesome

don't quit, but yeah like aldeon said, colors dont' work too well with each other and the font is very good. but the design looks good.

centre the J272 over the arrow

Its good, only the colors that dont go...

Holy [cabbage] my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible.

Holy cabbage my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wouldn't put it that way but the gradient on the background reaaally doesn't go well with the plain (bright) colours

Gradient or not, that's still going to look ugly. It's needs a complete color overhaul to be somewhat eyepleasing. Also, you obviously drew some of these shapes and upscaled them, so you have some serious problems on the edges, specifically that yellow rounded rectangle. It looks like it was smaller and he tried to distort it in perspective mode. The city thing doesn't look half bad but there are too many elements going on. I see what looks like a mushroom head, and a flower. Then the yellow rectangle has a split down the middle for no apparent reason, it would be different if other shapes had the same identifying quality to them. The lines in the background are an attempt at composition and they work pretty well. But again, I refuse to properly critique this piece until it is properly color corrected. How's that?

ty for the advice everyone, especially the thoroughly detailed list by keiphus. You could have said the first post a little nicer, but brutal honosty helps me realize that i need to improve it a lot.

Holy cabbage my eyes have just been raped. That's horrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Laughs. Alot. Dies.*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*person walks by casket, is supried from an undead cackle of glee* :shock:

ty for the advice everyone, especially the thoroughly detailed list by keiphus. You could have said the first post a little nicer, but brutal honosty helps me realize that i need to improve it a lot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A perfect example of how people are supposed to take criticism.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep working at it, NACHO.