July 18, 200520 yr When the world comes to a rest And there is no sign of light You lie in bed and close your eyes As you dissolve into the night You lay there calm and quiet As if everything were dead Then your mind starts to stir And you are lifted from your bed You have entered your dream And your secrets spill out It makes you want to scream And it tempts you to shout You enter a world of fantasy Between sorcery and danger You meet magnificent creatures And become part of the adventure Then you are returned to your bed Just as you spot a golden beam The sunlight reaches your eyes, And you think, it was just a dream. ~somaster ..... did you like it? please review
July 20, 200520 yr Author why whats wrong with my avatar...i think pirates are cexy. i am a girl by the way. in case you were wondering :wink:
July 22, 200520 yr You enter a world of fantasy Between sorcery and danger You meet magnificent creatures And become part of the adventure u screwed up abit in this verse and the first verse as u did not follow the ryhme sequence, apart from that keep on writing http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
July 22, 200520 yr Author yes im aware of that...it was on purpose but thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
July 29, 200520 yr good poem 10/10 Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
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