December 31, 200817 yr It's good, although it's totally about RuneScape... Others may not like it much. Not much to say in the way of typos, except I believe you have two Chapter Sixes. And it's quite long. Which is neither a bad thing nor a good thing, I just am not a fan of long stories... They normally lose my attention after a bit. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube
December 31, 200817 yr Author Thanks =) I posted this one on the RS forums; it's not the first I wrote, but it is the first I did on RuneScape. I'm sorry it was so long, but glad that you read through it. I'll get right on that double chapter thing.
December 31, 200817 yr If you've written other ones that weren't based on RuneScape you'd probably get more feedback [on them than on this one] if you posted them here. Don't be afraid to post... I've posted some total crap here and I didn't die. :roll: Seriously, if you want to see just search hawkxs (or rather don't) And now I'm rambling. Sorry. :-# sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube
January 1, 200917 yr Author It's no problem at all... I would post the other story, but I'm considering getting it published and can't risk having it stolen. Would it be alright if I added you?
January 1, 200917 yr Sure. And also, you could consider just posting a bit of it, perhaps a page or so. I know that others who are publishing their stuff sometimes do that. sig by Soa.....tip.it times.....art & mediadeviantart/flickr/last.fm/steam/twitter/tumblr/youtube
January 3, 200917 yr That was awesome. Best story i've read so far. Don't worry about bricking it all, it's far better then having chapter, comment, comment, chapter etc. You are very creative and I would probably enjoy anything else you write. Keep it up :D
January 4, 200917 yr Author Thanks a lot :D I have a few more chapters done, I'll put them up for you.
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