Hey all,

 

 

 

Today, I tried to create an anime drawing.

 

I scanned it so you can CC, although it looks better irl. Here's it's a little flat (It's a bit more streched irl), and I went over it in paint, because it didn't scan that well.

 

 

 

Anywho, some critism would be nice.

 

 

 

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Thank you.

Wow you weren't kidding :shock: I resized it for you if you want :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it looks pretty good, particularly for your first try! I think the main thing that could use improvement is the hair. Right now it just looks kind of thick and lumpy. Also the left eye (our left) looks a tad bigger than the right :ohnoes:

Very well done for a first time :thumbup:. For crits, I think the head is slightly boxy and the mouth too stiff if you get what I mean, also have to agree with tripsis.