January 10, 200917 yr 1. Too grainy in my opinion, did you apply a texture layer above it? The clippermask? left too her nose feels out of place, the C4D (?) left to her face also feels misplaced and the brown lightning isn't precisely good looking (lower the opacity slightly). Other than that I think the focal is well placed and some effects have been applied on a good/great way, you also made the text better than the average person here. 2. Best one in this batch in my opinion, great use of colours, well placed text and focal. What I don't like/favour is the rendaom black dots around the symbol it feels out of place compared with the bright signature. Slightly too bright but other than well done signature. 3. Boxes, been there done that, they neither look good nor give a good flow if you ask me. text is well made but distractive. Colours are yet again well used except on the focal. 4. Too much contrast, don't really know what to comment more than that though.
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