Transformers - Robots in Disguise!

[Shiny]

Even though this robot isn't in his disguise right now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Jason321]

Hmm, let's see. First of all, sorry if my Criticism isn't constructive or well thought out. This Australian Summer heat is really getting to me :(

 

 

 

Number one - The colours aren't good at all. The text doesn't suit it well either. The smudging looks low quality and rushed. Blending is somewhat decent :thumbsup: I like the idea of the pentool and I think it looks quite nice. But those colours bring the pentool down :( Take that border off man. What is that, 5px? I know you love those 5 pixels but you gotta let them go :P

 

 

 

Number two - What's the green and blue stuff? It's really distracting. Overall there's a lack of effects and variety. I don't like that bright, thick cinematic border and I don't like the thing on the left either.

 

 

 

All I can say is keep reading tutorials, becuse I can't really think of anything to help you. Hope I did actually help and pointed out the flaws. If not, sorry :wall:

 

 

 

Good luck.

[Laxaria]

Generally, I hate all the borders. Remove them.

 

 

 

As for the first one, the text is really out of place. Don't use text effects, as they are really cliched and overrated. I like the flow in sig, but there is too much blue in the left as compared to the colors on the right. The smudging is boring and quite bland.

 

 

 

The lighting is weird as the pentooling is "glowing" yet it doesn't affect the focal. You need to move the focal a bit to the left to fit into the rule of thirds. Composition and concept is there though.

 

 

 

 

 

For the second one.... Overused and overcliched. Try something different instead of replicate old effects!

[VjuliusT]

The smudging looks like you waved your arm rapidly :-#. I'd try new effects if I were you, can't really give you any tips on the smudging as I can't see what kind of effect your trying to get with it.